New remix I came up with thoughts? Is it clear? Understand most of it?

[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/elmodoesit/elmo-f ... nice-watch[/soundcloud]

Also, take a listen to this song i am working on:
http://picosong.com/dTL/

Let me know what yah think

Latest track I put down, thoughts?

[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/elmodoesit/elmo-motivation-freestyle[/soundcloud]

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I think you should transition the first hook effects in half way through the first play at the start of the track. Kinda make it sound like your cranking up the beat

Definitely would bump this in my whip, Sealed 12" hitting in the back

Also, the second verse is hella contrast from everybody, and ...

First off this beat goes hard like rebar

Second your flow is perfect for this kinda beat, sounds like the voice of a man who has seen so much in his life

The hook is great(but I feel it should have more contrast with your voice, i feel the strong contrast and immediately know to pay attention when ...

Been working on a few songs with fellow artist on soundcloud, here is one of them.

http://picosong.com/VP7/



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I really like the intro bars you got going, with the down south rhyming scheme. Very Dee-CENT

The hook is nice and simple, great for a catchy beat like this.

What I would recommend for this track would be more of a contrast from you rapping your verses and the hook since it is your voice. The beat ...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=feGASGKNtZE

Denzel has been done to death... time to move on

Rellik wrote:That shit is sick now, I'ma download this shit, BARRY WHITES STAND UP! Me and you need to do our own radio show.

Thanks bro, MST3K is dope, netflix all the time

The voice is coming in, the compression helps a lot, I'd like to hear that Crazy Love song with the compression. Keep that shit banging.

Peep my crazy love thread, I just did a remastered version, I think it's ten times better.

http://soundcloud.com/elmodoesit/elmo-crazy-love

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So I am starting to grasp the concepts of using EQ and Compressors along with some others for my vocals, I think these effects make a fast improvement in my song clarity wise.

http://soundcloud.com/elmodoesit/elmo-crazy-love

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Alright guys,

First off, I would like to really thank all you guys for the tips you have been giving me.

I have always know from the beginning that compression was important in hip hop vocals, I just never knew when you were suppose to apply the compression in the mastering process.

Well ...

Here is my latest piece

http://soundcloud.com/elmodoesit/elmo-p ... -freestyle


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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/anywh ... ml#p164260

First off, dope beat.

2nd, like livelearn said the dubs a bit much.

Also I like the flow a lot in this one, very consistant!

Like the beginning flow pattern after the first hook, really dope.

I enjoyed the last verse alot more then the first, you sound a lot more confident in it. Like certain in ...

Alright guys, big shout out to Slicka for the help.

I played around with panning and some delay, tell me what you think. Original post link updated automatically via soundcloud.

http://soundcloud.com/elmodoesit/elmo-karate-freestyle

Hey bro it aint too bad just a bit monotone maybe mix it up a bit n bring more energy to it. Not bad keep posting

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Does this other freestyle I did have the same monotone as this one? I tried to switch it up a bit ...