eLmo - Motivation Freestyle

[eLmo]

Latest track I put down, thoughts?

[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/elmodoesit/elmo-m ... -freestyle[/soundcloud]

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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/when- ... 22300.html

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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/just- ... 22322.html

[TreTru]

beat starts off nice..mellow n smooth..

uhhhmm vocalz seem a lil low...hard to catch ya words

well.flo's pretty coo...hmm it's a freestyle so it is
what it is...

i like the beat tho..but would be alot better with a constant concept ..imo..

coo for a free tho..keep doin ya thing

[Dos]

like tre said, vocals needa be louder. mess with the EQ's prolly will do it.
flows reasonably on point.. sounds smooth from what i can really really here.
presence is cool, same with delivery.. but you sound hella mono-tone.
for a freestyle its decent, but its hard for me to really get into the lyrics because of the mono-tone sound to it. i'd like to hear some music that wasn't freestyled, keep at it eLmo..

rtf.. http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/game- ... 22172.html

[Lawgix]

that beats fuckin illy man.... verse is quiet up ya vocals man... or turn the beat down.... good shit tho man (y)