Been working on a few songs with fellow artist on soundcloud, here is one of them.
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Re: eLmo - BodyBags (Produced by Terrorist-20K)
The production was okay...nothing too impressive though. It kind of reminded me of a Michael Myers film lol Needless to say, it had a very dark vibe to it.
**You mentioned the producer was someone you met on soundcloud...just a reminder...you can stream your soundcloud player directly in the illest threads now...so you won't have to use those links to file share websites anymore
...but back to your track. It was an okay track..it seemed to lack energy. Like it sound like you read it directly off the paper it was written on and you just didn't have any motivation at the time. (I'm not dissin you now...I'm just giving you constructive critisism) It lacked swagger...it lacked emphasis...it just lacked all of the executable elements that it needed to make it a full-blown track with replay value. Your bars sound more like sentences, and kind of run-on and on and on. You need a different approach.
Check it...if I were you. I'd practice the song and commit it somewhat to memory before recording it. Throw the beat up on the board...and re-record this from scratch. Put your heart and soul into it. Spit that shit like it's the only thing you'll ever be able to show the world and it's your last chance to do so. I want to hear you recite that song like you believe every word you say in it!
As of right now, I don't think it really has a replay value. It's rough around the edges and needs work. And whatever you do...if you DO decide to re-record it...TONE DOWN ON YOUR AD-LIBS! Damn them shits were loud and annoying. Turn them down next time. Blend them in with the instrumental...make them real subtle. Other than that...thats all the advice I can give.
As of now...I can only give this jawn a 5/10
Keep droppin bruh and much respect to ya!
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**You mentioned the producer was someone you met on soundcloud...just a reminder...you can stream your soundcloud player directly in the illest threads now...so you won't have to use those links to file share websites anymore
...but back to your track. It was an okay track..it seemed to lack energy. Like it sound like you read it directly off the paper it was written on and you just didn't have any motivation at the time. (I'm not dissin you now...I'm just giving you constructive critisism) It lacked swagger...it lacked emphasis...it just lacked all of the executable elements that it needed to make it a full-blown track with replay value. Your bars sound more like sentences, and kind of run-on and on and on. You need a different approach.
Check it...if I were you. I'd practice the song and commit it somewhat to memory before recording it. Throw the beat up on the board...and re-record this from scratch. Put your heart and soul into it. Spit that shit like it's the only thing you'll ever be able to show the world and it's your last chance to do so. I want to hear you recite that song like you believe every word you say in it!
As of right now, I don't think it really has a replay value. It's rough around the edges and needs work. And whatever you do...if you DO decide to re-record it...TONE DOWN ON YOUR AD-LIBS! Damn them shits were loud and annoying. Turn them down next time. Blend them in with the instrumental...make them real subtle. Other than that...thats all the advice I can give.
As of now...I can only give this jawn a 5/10
Keep droppin bruh and much respect to ya!
Return some feed @
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/say-f ... 21449.html
Re: eLmo - BodyBags (Produced by Terrorist-20K)
not feeling it....
get better studio quality
get better studio quality
Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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