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Crazy Love - eLmo - REMASTERED 3-15-2011

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Here is my latest track out the studio.

Original beat is from NeYo Ft. Fab - Crazy Love

http://soundcloud.com/elmodoesit/elmo-crazy-love

New to the boards, is there a tag to embed soundcloud on these boards?

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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/shyst ... ml#p162719

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/monst ... ml#p162714


Thanks,
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yroC wrote:When you drop audio, you have to feed/review two other audio pieces or this will be locked.
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With your voice being so deep, you have something, you just need some really good mixing, without good mixing your voice isn't coming off right, you could kill the southern sound with your choice of substance. There is something there, you just need some coaching and you'll get it, I seriously hear this southern style, maybe some crunk west coast shit.
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Yeah you're voice is real deep son, don't know if this has anything to do with not hearing it through head phones but word, the track was alright. nothing much i can quote on, it was just alright. keep it up.
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Is your voice actually that deep? Or are you changing the pitch? Either way it sounds dope, reminds of me rapper that i just can't name right now. Work on your mixing to make your voice sound more crisp, because its very hard to understand what your saying in some parts. But all in all definately have potential, keep working at it.
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yeah i agree nice track poor mixing but i liked it none the less

good shit keep spitting
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Holy Crap, you got some deep vocals man.. thought was an effect but read the other feed.. mad crazy... cool you went with hip hop instead of country crap haha.. hard to catch some of the lyrics, i think the beat is a little high.. for what i heard it was cool.. flow was nice for what the deep vice could give lol.. still blows my mind.. looking at your photo and then BAM! Your voice.. Good stuff tho
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Thanks guys, will relay vocals on the track, and try to fix mixing problems.
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Should try an even jazzier beat and put some real deeper work on that female scene. Needs a bit more mastering though. Get the vocal higher. Some reverb perhaps?
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Your voice is very deep, and I think it needs to be smoothn out, or a lighter touch on the eq to make ur words more clearer, the way ur riding the beat is nice tho, and the adlibs and fx are coo..not bad but work on the voice thing becuz I want to understand the words ur spitten and not just vibe with nice flow u have...
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So I am starting to grasp the concepts of using EQ and Compressors along with some others for my vocals, I think these effects make a fast improvement in my song clarity wise.

http://soundcloud.com/elmodoesit/elmo-crazy-love

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Rellik wrote:That shit is sick now, I'ma download this shit, BARRY WHITES STAND UP! Me and you need to do our own radio show.
Thanks bro, MST3K is dope, netflix all the time
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