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When U Dance Wit Da Devil Feat. Kurse & Loon E Lou

Post by HKX »

This song will be featured on Da Essence tape that I'll be dropping pretty soon. This song is about a girl named Jupiter who ends up dancing with the devil. I think you guys are going to like this one. Listen as the story unfolds I'll be leaving feed for those who leave me feed enjoy.

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fantastic fukin song. :clap: :dance: :D
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dope shit, the beat fits the mood of the story perfect, and the hook was pretty tight too. all verses had it locked down.
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Post by Joe Saint »

Another amazing song by HKX , KURSE and LOON E LOU the hook and beat were dope as fuck

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Post by HKX »

good lookin' on da feed M33Kish & Joe dis song was in da makin' 4 a good while now I'm happy it's finally completed it's def 1 of my fav's on Da Essence.
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Post by Nah »

Shadowville-ish beat. dope as fuck. and it kinda reminds me of the Immortal Technique's song...

Verses are tight. the story telling is off the hook!

deep profound shit man. props!
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

immortal technique did dance with the devil and this beat is like a replica of it i believe lol, good track though, i like I.T.'s version better no offense
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Post by Mic S »

1st verse was dope.. good flow and good delivery - lyrics were dope
hook - could have been better but dope
2nd verse - i could dig the flow and delivery - lyrics are dope could have been more on point but were good none-the-less and the emotion/energy for track was perfect!!
3rd verse - i felt the energy - but emotion could have been shown more for the lyrics wrote... lyrics were cool, but if the emotion was on point it would have been dope


All together this was all around a dope collab.. good story -- keep doing your thing
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Post by Dos »

i listened to this fully, so i could get a feel.. pretty nice, the beat fits well with the beat, really well in fact.
anyways..

1st.
a few pronunciation issues, nothing big. im nit picking. good flow, a few adlibs would make this dope. deliveries ok, just think it coulda been smoother. DOPE story telling in the verse though, great shit.

hook meshed way to much into the 1st verse, tbh i didn't even know there was a hook till after the 2nd verse.

2nd.
flows pretty nice, different feel from the 2nd. and the presence n delivery is dope.. some slip ups that sound awkward.. but like i said in the beginning im nit picking. again, drop story telling.

3rd.
flow doesn't sound as smooth as it should, in certain parts. but presence n delivery are nice. your back n forth's where you imitate the "devil" were dope, you fitted the voice changes and presence for it really nice. different kinda out look compared to the other two verses.. which was refreshing.

over-all, this was kinda dope.. when i 1st listened i was like.. meh, its cool.. but then listening a 2nd time an taking more time to get into it i really noticed how nice the track actually is. dope collab, and keep at it guys.
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Post by eLmo »

First off this beat goes hard like rebar

Second your flow is perfect for this kinda beat, sounds like the voice of a man who has seen so much in his life

The hook is great(but I feel it should have more contrast with your voice, i feel the strong contrast and immediately know to pay attention when the first hook hits. Very important in my opinion

I like the back and forth, kinda of a dr dre and eminem synergy on a Guilty Conscience level if you get me. Way you all transition through out the track

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Post by TreTru »

beats coo i like these types of beats..

First Verse...haha niice..delivs always nice goin pretty hard..
2nd verse..more of the same Kurse is always on his game

3rd verse..change up on da flo..nice ..no probz here either imo..

hooks kinda trippy ..haha..but all good imo..

def got some replay value..im diggin da concept and storyline form ya'll are doin in this one...goood shyt..1
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