Just cuz im drunk...

[pest]

Ima post some shit up everyone else likes that im not a fan of...

[eLmo]

I really like the intro bars you got going, with the down south rhyming scheme. Very Dee-CENT

The hook is nice and simple, great for a catchy beat like this.

What I would recommend for this track would be more of a contrast from you rapping your verses and the hook since it is your voice. The beat changes but, I like to add like a reverb or drop some of the key words pitch to make it more catchy, cause thats what most people sing when they hear a song on the radio.

Keep um coming bro, and remember to throw some feed back up when you post a track to keep the music coming!

-eLmo

[pest]

thanks for the feed doggy.

[Kurse]

Definitely some solid mixtape material. When I first heard the beat...I was like, "Mehh, I dunno about this one..."
...it gave me that fruityloop made kinda vibe...
...but once you chimed in with the concept and the lyrics, it really turned the entire dynamic of the track around. So even though I wasn't "Wow'd" by the production...the clarity of the recording, the upbeat structure of the flow and the humor in the concept was enough to convince me that the song had replay value.

Those lyrics on the right beat would absolutely bang hard as a single release. I was really diggin this. Overall I'm going to give this an 8.5/10

Return some feed @
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/say-f ... 21449.html

[pest]

thanks man...

Id never put this onna album...
I just did it for fukks sake and caved in to givin people what they wanted...

[Grim]

deffinitely solid for a mixtape..i actually like rhymes like this with simpler schemes but great vibe...i feel you how this kind of songs aren't the artist's fav but this has a great bounce and flow to it...respect

[pest]

thanks man.