this is an interesting structure and concept..something different...creative....i wanna see more.

ooo now this is my type of lettin off steam...somethin i wrote awhile back..its actually an excerpt from my diary..lolz...i re introduce myself everytime i write in it...weird?..yes!


Introduction of my soul remains unknown
i shall never name what made a home in the shell named "P"
For all i know ...

sounds like an interesting battle

wow damn i've never been out of the USA...lol
New Mexico(born and raised)
California(oakland/berkely-my 2nd home)
Arizona(bout 6 miles from my hometown..lol)
Utah
Colorado
Nevada(VEGAS baby!)
Texas
Oklahoma
Kansas
Minnesota
Florida
New Hampshire
Georgia

ooo...when you hear me get down face to face people say i sound like Charlie Baltimore....or eve if im drunk..haha...but when you hear the recordings...nobody compares..i think?

ya this definately gives feed...i think imma like it here...nuff bullshit at six...lolz..thanks.

lol thanks...i haven't keyed in ages...so ya forced that shit..lolz

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/keystyle-cypher-chatroom-mutual-ekoms-vt10790.html

thought i'd introduce myself and drop a lil something from the lady...key straight off the dome....


Watch prit reek havoc with a {massive verse} crack vocals when i {press reverse} wit tha words hittin hard till ...

GOOD WAY TO PRACTICE..NEVER HURTS TO WORK ON YA MULTIES WITH RANDOM SHIT..LOLZ...NICE READ

WOULD'VE BEEN HOT IF IT WERE AN AUDIO FREESTLYE...NICE READ BUT IF ITS A KEY...YOU NEEDA UP ON YA TRANSITIONS....ADDS SOME MULTIES IT'LL MAKE THE FLOW BETTER

???WTF...IT SOUNDS LIKE YOUR JUST IN A LETHARGIC TRANCE TALKIN BOUT NUTHIN..LOLZ...SORRY THATS HOW I INTERPRETED...FIND A CONCEPT..STICK WITH IT..RHYME...AND MAKE IT FLOW IF YOU ARE TRYING TO SPIT...IF ITS A POEM..YOU GOTTA WORK ON THE IMAGERY A LITTLE BIT..THROW IN SOME METTAS AT LEAST.

VOCAB WAS ON POINT..FLOW STILL AWKWARD..BUT I SEE NOW THAT YOUR MORE OF A POET THAN A SPITTER....ADD SOME MULTIES AND SHIT WILL FLAME

NICE FLOW BUT YA SPELLING MADE IT A HARD READ....LIKE THE CONCEPT..IMAGERY IS COOL...WORK ON CONNECTING EACH CONCEPT THOUGH..SOUNDED WEIRD AT TIMES LIKE IT DIDN'T MAKE SENSE...

...CONCEPT WAS COOL...FLOW WASN'T THERE..BUT I SEE THAT WASN'T THE POINT...I WOULD'VE STEPPED UP A NOTCH ON THE VOCAB...BUST OUT THE THESAURUS FOR THE NEXT ONE...CUZ THIS ONE WAS MORE POEMY...LOL IF THAT IS EVEN A WORD.

YOOO..NICE DROP..LAST LINE DOPE..BUT I SEEN YA DROP BETTER...BEAST IT!