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Mass Effex
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Lookin through old books

Post by Mass Effex »

I'm at the, start of the game, no ball and chain
and it's gotta be long time before they call my name
but get aquainted, find a mental picture and paint it
start advancin, I'm too good for this damn canvas
I take it up a notch, raise it up a level
because there's too much steam buildin up in the kettle
plus I know I can still feel the risin tension
In a section, and we don't have enoguh protection
but you can bet that my talent's a blessin
and my flow's a vaccine for the game's infection
more like an epedemic, I'm so unprecedented to you
but you still don't know so stop pretendin you do

I need some competition, It ain't fair to be
that you're nothin, especially copmared to me
you need to step your game up, and aim for the target
don't do deals with devil, make bargins
so it ends up he the one who owes you now
you wanna make real money then I'll show you how
I'm a bat out of hell, it ain't hard to tell
and if I get locked up then I'm a carve my cell
with my name, Evadense, this isn't a game
and what started as a spark has arisen in flame
it's about to catch and burn the whole U.S.A.
destroy and rebuild it, only the best wasy
do this thing right, like it's supposed to be
that way my friends and family are close to me
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Post by Prit-E »

WOULD'VE BEEN HOT IF IT WERE AN AUDIO FREESTLYE...NICE READ BUT IF ITS A KEY...YOU NEEDA UP ON YA TRANSITIONS....ADDS SOME MULTIES IT'LL MAKE THE FLOW BETTER
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ScottJames
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Post by ScottJames »

the vocab was a lil too simple for my taste
everything was kinda elementary, but keep droppin fam
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WINS:
Ekmos - KO ... Duc3 - KO ... Jesodist - KO ... MagicMark - KO ... Animul_Instinkz - KO ... Old Rotten - KO ... Dr Kevorkian - KO ... Ambition - KO ... Eclipse - KO ... Domino - 5-3 ... Crimson - KO ... MC Scars - KO ... Modern Defiance - KO ... Tempest - KO ... QwarterZ - KO ... TreTru - KO ... Quix - KO ... Grim/Leeroi Green - KO ... Knowmad - KO ... Cre@tiv3 - KO ... MVario - TKO ... Hazard - KO ... ER - KO ... Colossus - KO ... FlipSide - KO ... JackDaRippa - KO ... JSteel - KO ... Kau The Lion - KO ... 32Neilz - KO ... Evolution - TKO ... Shazo - KO ... CBK - KO
LOSSES:
Cee4 - 5-3
OVERALL:
31-1
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Post by Gutta »

U mah boi, i know dis shit'd be fiya on audio fam
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