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Ladies first-intro key

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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/keyst ... 10790.html

thought i'd introduce myself and drop a lil something from the lady...key straight off the dome....


Watch prit reek havoc with a {massive verse} crack vocals when i {press reverse} wit tha words hittin hard till i {crash ya hearse} but not until i {mash ya first}...

Cuz the girl knock domes with my crew of {fly-and-high-uprisers} tearin through the newbs I {incise with incisors} with the creativity of about {95 McGuyvers}

So let me rock the homes of {the hip hop drones} till ya see me on X fils cuz {this beasts' unknown} illin the boyz cuz ya know this woman is grown straight tuckin heat till my {cover is blown}

but i don't run with steel {like an amputee} my lyrical fuel only spits {F-L-A-M-E} runnin monopolies cuz chances ain't {gotta thang on me} {let it rain on me}

while i continue to {ground shots to torsos} and {sound plots for more foes} cuz an herb gotta hate when i find {my spot on your dome} release this {tension from my home} in the form of ash from a volcanic cone.

Let this fire flicker on till history has passed, let the haters talk till their egos are gassed float from this hell and be free at last,
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Post by precise »

not a bad intro, some multies were forced but i can see ya got a decent concept of rhymescheme, i liked the "95 mcguyvers" line lol pretty creative

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while i continue to {ground shots to torsos} and {sound plots for more foes} cuz an herb gotta hate when i find {my spot on your dome} release this {tension from my home} in the form of ash from a volcanic cone.

^That was my favorite one, I liked the X-files thing in there too.
Keep doin it good like this man
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Post by Prit-E »

lol thanks...i haven't keyed in ages...so ya forced that shit..lolz
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Post by Kurse »

Definately a nice key-up...good to see females doin their thang in the threads again.

Definately keep droppin Prit
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Post by $incEar »

oh u kno..i'll rain on u haha ..whats good mah..nice to see you finally getting sum feedback :) told you its better than sixshot ..
anyways i've seen better from you but i'll go ahead & give this a 5/10 ..just work on your flow & consistancy
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Post by Haz »

You Did Pretty Straight..
I'm Sayin Come With Some Hard Punches And Stuff...
KEep The Flow Consistent.. I Understand THis a Key Though
BUt SHow Me How Much Potential u Got... 1 Piece isn't Enough lol
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Post by Prit-E »

ya this definately gives feed...i think imma like it here...nuff bullshit at six...lolz..thanks.
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out of the majority of female textcees ur one of the better ones, decent piece, keep droppin
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see this the perfect place to be..we not really super active but neither is anybody else so we all on the same level ya feel me
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$incEar wrote:see this the perfect place to be..we not really super active but neither is anybody else so we all on the same level ya feel me
i like u guys already haha
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Post by Def-init »

Interesting drop.

"but i don't run with steel {like an amputee} my lyrical fuel only spits {F-L-A-M-E} runnin monopolies cuz chances ain't {gotta thang on me} {let it rain on me} "

Was ill.
Would like to read some more of your drops. Keep them comin girl!
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