<r>Heres my first time on the mic EVER. and when i say mic i mean that shitty mic you get with def jam hero. wonder if there is enuf oomph in my voice!!<br/>
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Forgot to change the name from the instrumental but its me.<br/>
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hated it so much i deleted it couldnt figure out how ...

smooth as hell dude very dopish

kinda dope for a mkeshift recording.

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mp4grU6po_g[/video]

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/state-nothingness-vt20794.html#p165662
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/fortified-vt21283.html#p165663


Is this a fantasy, a twisted fantasy/
i try to talk to god but god doesnt answer me/
then i look out ...

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GdoIVHsIoYU&feature=channel_video_title[/video]

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/state-nothingness-vt20794.html#p165662
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/fortified-vt21283.html#p165663

Nikeys on my feet

na na na na na lets get creative/
rub it in there faces ...

nice rhyming but tired subject matter.

nice drop. a lot of nice rhymes in there.

hillarious titel. nice structure and rhymes dude.

your structure.nice rhymes. you rhyme like me.

I like to just sit back and make shit up as i go along it fun.


you never stoppin me a villain with wings like Mephistopheles/
a fire breathin demon smoke comin out the top of me/
and all of a sudden everybodys climbing on top of me/
so put a mustache on me and im mr monopoly/
so what we talkin g ...

ok 8-16 bars

house rules

due whenever.

-- Tue Mar 01, 2011 9:37 pm --

So fatal x about to get his head wrecked/
all with the rhymes i used on the text he read/
destroy this shit from london to nervada/
eat ya like a banana blow you mind like nervana/
cos you know no one can spit the same shit ...

i am so ready ill set up the battle amd pm you. ill go first too.

Every one the worst has happened lupe fiasco lasers has leaked in full. its only a week but its not good if tons of ppl download it without buying it.

ive spit both 1st and second verse they work fine. u cant tell just by reading but there are breaks and shit between lines.

that was an intresting read.