jam vs FatalX

[JiMMyJaM080691991]

ok 8-16 bars

house rules

due whenever.

-- Tue Mar 01, 2011 9:37 pm --

So fatal x about to get his head wrecked/
all with the rhymes i used on the text he read/
destroy this shit from london to nervada/
eat ya like a banana blow you mind like nervana/
cos you know no one can spit the same shit that jam does/
so ya better run cos im comin for you like uncle sam cuz/
Im gonna fuck shit up worse than uncle sam does/
and do all this shit while im sittin wearing pyjamas/
cos im insane and you cant match the pictures that i paint/
enter your brain ull be more fucked up than lil wayne/
this is like rikers island cos i got this shit on lock down/
and ull get raped by some fat guy with his cock out/
im a junkie for this shit u say that x is fatal/
tell me that while im drinking your blood from a ladel/
try to step to me what the fuck are u messin for/
i wont stop till youve dissapeared from this whole fucking message board/

[FatalX]

I'll post when I get a chance to devise a verse

-- Wed Mar 02, 2011 2:11 am --

Try to help me understand,Why?When you RAP your the CRITIC
Jimmy Jam you ain't "THE STREETS",so keep that wack shit in BRITAIN//
NOBODY asked your OPINION,let alone for a VERSE//
are you trying to be BOLD and did you call that your WORST//
Cause I.........GOTTA SAY,you GOT ALOT you GOTTA PAY//
.......16 bars,thats like WAR SHIT in MODERN DAYS//
........WANT WAR,well...check the ASSAULT//
I drop FLAMES like NAPALM even off of the COAST//
I CUT you OFF at the THROAT,before you EVER get a WORD IN//
and even though you POSTED FIRST,that SHIT wasn't WORTH IT//
a HYMEN to a VIRGIN,and CHERRIES never COUNT//
but I COUNT CHERRIES,now do you KNOW what I'm ABOUT//
go ahead and SOUND IT OUT,SCREAM like a RAPE VICTIM//
take your INNOCENCE in a sense with a HATE SYSTEM//
....MAKE A GREAT DIFFERENCE, NAH you NEVER WILL//
Thats WHY DOGS GO BELLY UP,and the REASON you've just been KILLED//

[Elite Punisher]

vote: fatalx overall more raw then jimmy's
fatal did good in most category's so ill give him the vote

[Omnie]

Jimmy was basic...nothing spectacular...flow was okay, needs work though, not much to say on his verse...

FatalX had an overall better verse. Better wordplay but still pretty basic...fav line "
I CUT you OFF at the THROAT,before you EVER get a WORD IN//"...and so...

MVGT: FatalX

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-- Wed Mar 09, 2011 6:10 am --

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