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This is my fortification against this domesticated nation
invading these vacant minds through lack of concentration
im for evasion cause i'll never fall for their persuasions
to structurally sound and always down for the Cause
through character flaws and the world thats driving me raw
with no pause cause its fluid and it cuts like a saw
carving a line in the sand to separate the worlds of faith
cause girls get raped and fires get started in the burning drape
people murder mates n turn to drugs to stay in perfect place
but this shit is cruel so pick your aim and pick it true
you getting fooled the system drools and dreams about getting you
and getting me but they cant see this aint a scripted duel
cause i'm fortified against their deathly bulging eyes
you cant hold this guy steal or murder this golden vibe
i leave um mortified cause its my life an do it til the flow will die
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Re: Fortified

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pretty good bro i like how its not basic
it had some strong point & rarely seen weak points
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Re: Fortified

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pretty good shit...
7.5/10
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Re: Fortified

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nice rhyming but tired subject matter.
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Re: Fortified

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upping this shizz
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