Hey that shit on point...with the backround but i do agree with the carry my thoughts line... its like u went hood with it but kept ur flow complicated...and we all kno hood niggas aint got no vocab LMAO!!!!! just playin dude... Its just like they say theres a certain audience u tryna get at and ...

$yphili$ wrote:Lol.. i Just Got Another Laugh Outta This... Thanks.

I don't know whether you're laughing at me or with me but I don't care lol I'm just glad someone's gettin' something out of this.

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Sound.222 is this you -- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xC03hmS1Brk

"I'm bad, like the movie attack of the clones, I'm dangerous like a fire in a nursing home."

haha Jon Lajoie. We're from the same city. Been meaning to go to one of his shows.

Dude is ur mom in the next room...? Cuz it sounds ...

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Did this one for fun. tips appreciated.

EDIT: Here's the finished version of this rhyme.
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That's right, slower!

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Any tips on improving my flow, tone of voice and what not will be appreciated. I want to work on my delivery primarily.

Liked this one tooo!


Bitch heres a hollow tip, swallow this acknowledge this....
All my respect went out the window for u.....and nigga u should follow it!!!!

yung dosia (Dosia vs Ambition)


p.s these arn't my Fav of all time or anything....just a couple barz that stood out compared to the ...

forgive him Sequence, for he knows not what he speaks
his rhymes are store bought, unlike his hand down sneaks
let me hand down a clue, it's full of wisdom and wit
don't rhyme, don't spit, just go back to being a jit

thanks man

I'm not voting or anything, but modef went effin crazy on this track. I'd bump this on my zune. Your voice reminded me of that one bone thugs guy.

Heads act like they on my shoulders claimin' to know wats inside my hood,
Probly cuz I drive you bitches crazy and I ain't even using Tiger's wood.

*golf clap* That's a well done sleight against Mr. Woods.

So y'all retalliate with crazy antics and you "ants" kinda "tick" me off

Niiiice ...

I haven't written many rhymes since I started writing a few weeks ago. Looking for all positive/negative feedback.


i was walking in the park when i dropped my money,
500 dollars cash, big trouble with my honey,
i turn to give chase but my bullies are in place,
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qwarterzone wrote:punches, metaphors, and multi's

What are punches and multi's? I most likely know what they are but have never heard the terminology before.

I wrote this rhyme over the long weekend. I had unplugged my clocks and changed the ones I couldn't turn off. Time is distracting when you just wanna chill and blaze.

I DONT KNOW WHAT TIME IT IS
THE TIME OF THE WORLD AINT NONE A MAH BIZ
I GOT SOME WEED SO YOU KNOW IM BLITZED
THE TIME OF THE WORLD ...

Got a hearty chuckle out of me. I wish their were more lighthearted lyrics on this site. Going hard seems to be where the times are at though