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Alphanumeric or the time I didn't finish a song

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Alphanumeric or the time I didn't finish a song

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See like i said..everything is on point... flow is cool.. and u on beat straight... and u fucking crazy with that stupid shit...which is cool... but put some cojones into my dude.... I swear u better put some balls into it... it will take more cuts and it will make it harder on u but the end result will be better
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Dope.. That's A Old Skool Flow. Shall I Daresay Slick Rick Illest?
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this could be better, but you def was on some slick rick type shit. flow was choppy tho n all over the place some of your vocals were low. i think the more you record a verse the better it gets so maybe try that cuz this shit was decent it the quality would be better
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didn't really like this... beat was annoying... and the flow of it was okay but just no expressions... even slick rick had expressions... old school hip hop is like tellin a story to an audience you have to have enthusiasm in ur voice or they'll go to sleep....
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^^^^^^ i agree.... now feed on my shit...dammit
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