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Rhyme #5 (M instrumental)

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Rhyme #5 (M instrumental)

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Any tips on improving my flow, tone of voice and what not will be appreciated. I want to work on my delivery primarily.
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Man, I'm white and you sound whiter than I do. You sound like Steve Jobs on the mic. Did you record this on your break at Geek Squad?
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U need to practice... A Lot....
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Reminds of some old Plug One from De La Soul shit.
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Going door to door beating girls to the floor! haha.. Feel sorry for ur future wife..hahahahaha! naw just fucking with you!
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