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Quadrapalegic acrobatics with andro habits flexing muscles pointless/
Like a run on sentence, endless...mind numbing I annoint this/
holy waters, scolding ...

This is me, trying to be, the only thing I believe
Probably never to succeed, but breathe in which will help to relieve
The stress and anger, hint of danger but not wager
On the tips of lifes fingers, thus I must enable....

helluva start...
I haven't even read anymore and your first 4 reeled me ...

Ass tools?

I've never heard that had me rolling...

But on the serious side:
Addicted to scriptures , on somethin no one can touch/
Like knickers on strippers i might never come up/

these to lines were def your best.

Rhyming Kause and forts didn't seem quite right, but who am i to judge how ...

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The gun cabinets in the bedroom but i'm in the basement/
Two flights of stairs might change my mind Must have patience/
I'm still waiting And I'm still talking to ...

Icabar Krane dreams, cuz of you pumpkin, I got no head to hold//

What that line is sick... good play on words... damn

Things phase me, trees sway me, I'ma leave baby//

started the 2nd as you ended the first with this play on words and continued through the verse... nicely done

finished strong ...

Metaphors for predators
Bite to bark ratio equal im a let it roar
more meaning with less words
off the top out my mandible
like wild animals shed fur
im shakin but a steady hand
with such a fast knife you bled blurs
biblical red words are those of jesus
the rest are filled in by just man they're ...

From sun up to sundown step and get run down
Repping some dumb town don't matter where your from clown

In Pride I remain the King of Lying

Good play on words with that line

See my life is filled with screams n crisis
take care of friends N family the dream is priceless
It goes beyond that due to Long back
A heart with warm intentions while Reality Seems to Ice It

These four just flowed with a ...