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Same MISERABLE FATE, watch 'side real' from the hay makers this isn't a DIGITAL TAPE
the real ISSUE YOU FACE ...

dis just a prefix, no you aint seen da goons-ta-come...
cuz you da gangsta on myspace wit all ya google-guns//

when you respond to something that's posted online, and actin tough like you think your doin, that finisher in that line kinda describes you more then them .. even tho i don't know any of ...

okey, for the foreign guys, u need to explain catacyclismic!


first of all, u make me look bad, so i don't like u anymore! secondly, i don't really need to anything deeper into this then saying, yup man - u still got it, the evil genius is a fuckin lyrical one! the first 14 bars or sth (don't ...

I'm Just Lookin 4 a Shot Like Alcohalics Outa Rehab
Wallet Full Of Weed Bags..It's Green But Not Green Cash

nice one! never read anything from u before, and with memories of the quality shown by the people in this section the last time i checked in, i kinda didn't expect anything. couldn't been ...

Eeey, I'm back again .. wrote some stuff the other lines, some punchlines i liked, sooo i figured i might post it here to see if i really suck at writing punches or not! appreciate any opinions!


I'm an attraction like the Niagara Falls
harder then Hugh hefner and his viagra balls
I'm sicker then ...

Haha .. nah Lawgic, russian? it's norwegian!

dæven, trodde ikkje at eg skulle møte nokke nordmenn her inne!

-- Sun Aug 09, 2009 8:41 am --

i'm write this in english, so that the rest of the forum understands what i say .. so no worries man!

to be honest, it's good ... i like it, follow the story well, i can relate to it in some way tho ...

Crazy .. there's just no other way to describe it

it was solid ... kinda let your heart out a bit .. it's nice! good substance, theme that many relates too ..

this line stood out to me:

im losin - battlin with these demons of my thoughts/
like life is driftin out of me n leavin just a corpse/

that's deep! it was a nice drop man! lookin forward ...

should put this in the poem section .. more of a poem then a verse IMO

thanks for the feed

i'll try out the congos! didn't get what u meant when sayin there should be a break or somthin when the drumline actually stops before it loops ..

there is a kick, that's true ... also clap, need to turn the volume up .. when i come to think about it, it's more of a pop joint, sounds a bit like the style akon used on his latest album .. but thanks for checkin it out and givin feed

nice man .. thanks!

thanks .. appreciated!

first one: don't like to synth on the hook - love the drums .. fresh stuff tho, liked the verse part!

second: grimey synth .. didn't like the drums that much, increase the volume a bit.. love that lil squeekin sound u used!