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Yblem Ft. Delario - Loop Of Life

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We made this song a couple of weeks ago, it turned out good.
Its produced by Tom Blue.
Delario is a rapper from Bergen in Norway, a rare talent.

I hope yall enjoy: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... ID=7938025


Im lookin forward to the feedback, im very happy with the feedback I got for my other song!

POW!

Delarios myspace: http://www.myspace.com/delariomusic
Tom Blue`s myspace: http://www.myspace.com/tombluemusic
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dæven, trodde ikkje at eg skulle møte nokke nordmenn her inne!

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i'm write this in english, so that the rest of the forum understands what i say .. so no worries man!

to be honest, it's good ... i like it, follow the story well, i can relate to it in some way tho .. the mixing wasn't really good, and u need tu turn the volume on your vocals up .. chill beat, and a good topic tho! delivery fitted the song, with the laid back theme .. lyrically, it was kinda basic - but there's no need to come up with some fancy multies on this one .. all in all, it's a good one
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dæven, trodde ikkje at eg skulle møte nokke nordmenn her inne!... is that russian or somethin dude????
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Yeah i was feeling the tag team rapping. the mixing could have been better. lyrics wise its good.. you have the voice for a good rapper.. over all its good.

If you ever want to do a christian track, let me know. We will do some damage. Unless you are like not into God and all.. then we can make a possitive song
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yo this shit is pretty sick homie for real... i like this... the singings cool too man... hooks really sick man... flow/verse was solid man... it was all good man keep this shit up homie... u'll get somewhere fam... lates
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I Really Like This, You Have Talent And In The Hook It Showcases Your Skills. The Hook Was Awesome Maybe Because It Sounds Familiar To Me, It Sounds Reggae Rappish Like A Bone Thugs Melody, And That's Good. I Liked The Back And Forth Thing But I Felt Somewhere You Fell Off On The Timing Or Rhythm A Little You Know I Mean, But Overall That's Fuckin Sick Your I'll With It.
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Post by -MenaCe- »

Good shyt...

im feelin the whole thing..
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Haha .. nah Lawgic, russian? it's norwegian!
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