Let's Get Grimey!

[B-Bear]

Eeey, I'm back again .. wrote some stuff the other lines, some punchlines i liked, sooo i figured i might post it here to see if i really suck at writing punches or not! appreciate any opinions!


I'm an attraction like the Niagara Falls
harder then Hugh hefner and his viagra balls
I'm sicker then Heath Ledger and a bag of cocaine
lethal like the bullet that shot Kurt Cobain
notorious like Christopher Wallace
victorious, cause my game so flawless
legendary like I revive the greats
and powerful, like I'll divide a lake
u cant feed me rappers and nor feed me beats
cause I've ripped them all apart to feed these streets
I dont Rock-A-Fella, man I Rock-A-Mic
tryna show off, and u'll get knocked tonight
ur a dick with no nuts, slick, but no guts
rich, with one slut, a bitch with no cups
I'm that Murder Inc, that's what my pencil is
and I'ma go so hard that u can't even censor is
throw shots at u like the last lover I had
u swallow that shit like u make that bitch look bad
I'm that skill, it's a circle of illness
that creativity mixed with that mad flow
intelligence aint bad tho, that ability to
make a verse mean so much more then the words
add up some punchlines, a swagger like mine
and that's that fuckin reason to say that it's my time!


from the north to the south, u know waht i'm about,
like Gwen Stefani I cast NO DOUBT
sayin hip hop is dead aint entirely true
cause I'm inspired to fire at liars like you,
don't throw me a stack to have me flow on a track
I say like Obie and Stat, how phony is that?
ay, ya homie is back, to prove the critics wrong
I'm King Kong, I tear up the city with one song
no catchy hook, not a bastard or a crook
I'ma take it back to the books, cause Hip hop is shook
the new look doesn't fit, and to be honest with u,
that outfit kinda looks like shit, soo
let's strip it apart, till we're left with the basics
the elements, everything else, call that irrelevant
cause all u need is one mic, one love
one beat, one DJ and one club, ya diiiig? haha

-- Sun Aug 16, 2009 7:36 am --

didn't see the post bout the link rule being put back into effect, soo here's the link

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/topic ... ml#p121312

-- Wed Aug 19, 2009 6:10 am --

feedback anyone?