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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/evil- ... 17f90c6222

Feel like days have gone by only sittin here for minutes/
its another fleetin vicit from my truest mirror image/
its a vivid view im subject to when lookin in my eyes/
all these thougths of "keep it real" - when im livin in disguise/
realise that reality - really got me screwed up/
try to keep it under wraps - pressures gettin too much/
boozed up - stumblin - wondering, confusion?/
smallest hours - tallest towers - strip away illusion/
im losin - battlin with these demons of my thoughts/
like life is driftin out of me n leavin just a corpse/
of sorts - try to talk to god - still im just a man/
depression got me in a gloved hand - understand?/
its a romance with misery - dancin to a full moon/
ever let me go again, know it would be too soon/
n as i stare at the ashes of my smouldering dreams/
still a fire in my heart but how much colder it seems.......
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Post by Haz »

WOW!...

in My Opinion this Shit Was Solid As Hell...
Sick Piece...
Havent Seen You Around .. But I Was Feeling This...


Feel like days have gone by only sittin here for minutes/
its another fleetin vicit from my truest mirror image/
its a vivid view im subject to when lookin in my eyes/
all these thougths of "keep it real" - when im livin in disguise/
realise that reality - really got me screwed up/

^ Sick...

Felt Like for a Short Amount Of Bars you Held Alot Of Substance..


Rhyme Scheme Was Cool.. Flow Was nice... Picture's Were Painted..
This Was Good..

Keep Droppin Dawg
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thanks for the feed...ups
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lol thanks for the feed man...1.
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Post by B-Bear »

it was solid ... kinda let your heart out a bit .. it's nice! good substance, theme that many relates too ..

this line stood out to me:

im losin - battlin with these demons of my thoughts/
like life is driftin out of me n leavin just a corpse/

that's deep! it was a nice drop man! lookin forward to seeing more
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damn that shit was hot !
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thanks for the luv people..
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