You couldn't punch with words if you were holdin pens, quix is always visitng golden Ms, well go to them,
no contempt, but 3+1/2 years you've "driven" to be a vet here, an ya'v got no "belt" or respect to show for (chauffer) them.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ok, the first part of your setup,was ok, but the flip was slightly weak, and then from there you go to quix is visiting golden m's, so im assuming you mean mcdonalds, which is a completely different idea, its like saying , this dude enjoys walks in a park, this dude is a mailman in afganistan,, try to keep everything relevant..next line, nice transition, turned into a nice wordplay personal,
lyricist ha ,Quit, bitch we need quick wit,not bloods an crips shit, drop out the fight,im not gonna lie.all your dropping is shite.
guns son? you've never touched one in your life,
an ya'v obviously never hit a switch, because quix lil hits couldn't knock out the light.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^nice flow here, didnt like the end rhyme shite, , especially after you just mentioned shit earlier,makes the rhyme seem forced,again im liking the end personals,to a flip,, this is how to do a personal properly, mention the personal as a concept, then flip it ,
although, quix never hit a switch, is not really a strong concept, because obviously he has hit light switches, i wouldve probably said, ya couldnt 'put out light' as thomas edison...
Anyways g'luck Cbk
sorry "newby" but your Facts didn't Gel and tracks didn't sell ...this match is over!!! we're just lacking the bell!!
he's tappin himself, n you still claim that i'm not respected on this site??? ... than why do you continouslly ask for my help????... lmfao on avoiding the L's!
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^nice setup line to flip, what happend to the multi at the end, mismatched..lol.. anyway decent personal. but felt you couldve fliped it better than avoiding the ls. i would said, 'asking for help', more than job aplications,
I can't help but Call him Bee-Atch; you put in NO work at all, annndddddd stay on Call at Remax!
yes i'm bout to beat this fag'back to back'...cuz this dude jumps from 'sack to sack' more often than ... Miami Dolphins Recaps
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^didnt get the remax setup, nice end punch but a bit of a generic tho, couldve been aimed at anyone...
punches very slight edge to cbk,, this was the toughest one to decide, cbk came consistent in concept flip for both bars, while quix came nice in the last one, first one felt more statementish imho... and if quix came just as strong in the first bar, he would ve had this cat..whether it was generic or personal....
personals cbk both bars contained a personal into a flip , the light was probably your best flip, the chafer was decent wordplay , flip was kinda weak.. quix came with just one personal in the first bar....second one was a good , generic punch that couldve been thrown at anyone...although strong..
mvgt, cbk,,..very improved couple of punches there kid.... getting better..keep it up..