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PBL Week Two: CBK -VS- Quix (READY 4 VOTES!!!)

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Week Two

Tale of the Tape

Quix

1-0-0
Last Week: Won (Via No Show)
2 Points

-VS-

CBK

1-0-1
Last Week: Beat Enders
3 Points
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2 Bars
Due By: Sunday December 18th, 2011
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Re: PBL Week Two: CBK -VS- Quix

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I will NOT NO SHOW!! g'luck Cbk
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Re: PBL Week Two: CBK -VS- Quix

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check !! good luck man



yo, we both posted drop our bars plz.



YO WHERE THE FUCK IS OUR BARS???



FUCK IT !

i've taken the liberty of dropping my own punches in this battle, as speakers is slacking.

quix i recommend you do the same.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

You couldn't punch with words if you were holdin pens, quix is always visitng golden Ms, well go to them,
no contempt, but 3+1/2 years you've "driven" to be a vet here, an ya'v got no "belt" or respect to show for (chauffer) them.




lyricist ha ,Quit, bitch we need quick wit,not bloods an crips shit, drop out the fight,im not gonna lie.all your dropping is shite.
guns son? you've never touched one in your life,
an ya'v obviously never hit a switch, because quix lil hits couldn't knock out the light.

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Re: PBL Week Two: CBK -VS- Quix

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i guess speakers is busy maybe with all the site crashes... So i'll drop my verse too





Expo: - Not trying to be a dick but this i a battle, so he has asked me many times to leave feed and reccomendations. thats all good man.
-Dolphin recaps = Replays, they get a ton of Sacks!


Anyways g'luck Cbk

sorry "newby" but your Facts didn't Gel and tracks didn't sell ...this match is over!!! we're just lacking the bell!!
he's tappin himself, n you still claim that i'm not respected on this site??? ... than why do you continouslly ask for my help????... lmfao on avoiding the L's!

I can't help but Call him Bee-Atch; you put in NO work at all, annndddddd stay on Call at Remax!
yes i'm bout to beat this fag'back to back'...cuz this dude jumps from 'sack to sack' more often than ... Miami Dolphins Recaps



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You couldn't punch with words if you were holdin pens, quix is always visitng golden Ms, well go to them,
no contempt, but 3+1/2 years you've "driven" to be a vet here, an ya'v got no "belt" or respect to show for (chauffer) them.
first thing i notice is your lines are kind of long, that first line right there is 1 and a half lines, work on your structure. The setup line
was senseless to me bout the "holdin pens"/"punch with words" the correlation doesnt make sense. The Chauffer them line was more wordplay to me than an actual diss, but it had pretty decent hit behind it.



lyricist ha ,Quit, bitch we need quick wit,not bloods an crips shit, drop out the fight,im not gonna lie.all your dropping is shite.
guns son? you've never touched one in your life,
an ya'v obviously never hit a switch, because quix lil hits couldn't knock out the light
you should focus on punchs like your last line here. The setup again was ugly, but the punch on this was decent



sorry "newby" but your Facts didn't Gel and tracks didn't sell ...this match is over!!! we're just lacking the bell!!
he's tappin himself, n you still claim that i'm not respected on this site??? ... than why do you continouslly ask for my help????... lmfao on avoiding the L's!

Nice, thats what i wana see, good multis, flow, and a solid punch at the end

I can't help but Call him Bee-Atch; you put in NO work at all, annndddddd stay on Call at Remax!
yes i'm bout to beat this fag'back to back'...cuz this dude jumps from 'sack to sack' more often than ... Miami Dolphins Recaps

lol another good line

VOTE=Quix, hes lines are constructed more to actually make his opponent look stupid and diss em, which thats wat punchs are about. CBK had the personal in the begining but quix flipped the personal shit too and tied it together nicer i think, the flow and the lines ran together more smoothly.

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Re: PBL Week Two: CBK -VS- Quix (READY 4 VOTES!!!)

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You couldn't punch with words if you were holdin pens, quix is always visitng golden Ms, well go to them,
no contempt, but 3+1/2 years you've "driven" to be a vet here, an ya'v got no "belt" or respect to show for (chauffer) them.

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ok, the first part of your setup,was ok, but the flip was slightly weak, and then from there you go to quix is visiting golden m's, so im assuming you mean mcdonalds, which is a completely different idea, its like saying , this dude enjoys walks in a park, this dude is a mailman in afganistan,, try to keep everything relevant..next line, nice transition, turned into a nice wordplay personal,




lyricist ha ,Quit, bitch we need quick wit,not bloods an crips shit, drop out the fight,im not gonna lie.all your dropping is shite.
guns son? you've never touched one in your life,
an ya'v obviously never hit a switch, because quix lil hits couldn't knock out the light.

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^nice flow here, didnt like the end rhyme shite, , especially after you just mentioned shit earlier,makes the rhyme seem forced,again im liking the end personals,to a flip,, this is how to do a personal properly, mention the personal as a concept, then flip it ,
although, quix never hit a switch, is not really a strong concept, because obviously he has hit light switches, i wouldve probably said, ya couldnt 'put out light' as thomas edison...




Anyways g'luck Cbk

sorry "newby" but your Facts didn't Gel and tracks didn't sell ...this match is over!!! we're just lacking the bell!!
he's tappin himself, n you still claim that i'm not respected on this site??? ... than why do you continouslly ask for my help????... lmfao on avoiding the L's!

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^nice setup line to flip, what happend to the multi at the end, mismatched..lol.. anyway decent personal. but felt you couldve fliped it better than avoiding the ls. i would said, 'asking for help', more than job aplications,

I can't help but Call him Bee-Atch; you put in NO work at all, annndddddd stay on Call at Remax!
yes i'm bout to beat this fag'back to back'...cuz this dude jumps from 'sack to sack' more often than ... Miami Dolphins Recaps

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^didnt get the remax setup, nice end punch but a bit of a generic tho, couldve been aimed at anyone...



punches very slight edge to cbk,, this was the toughest one to decide, cbk came consistent in concept flip for both bars, while quix came nice in the last one, first one felt more statementish imho... and if quix came just as strong in the first bar, he would ve had this cat..whether it was generic or personal....

personals cbk both bars contained a personal into a flip , the light was probably your best flip, the chafer was decent wordplay , flip was kinda weak.. quix came with just one personal in the first bar....second one was a good , generic punch that couldve been thrown at anyone...although strong..

multis quix

flow quix

mvgt, cbk,,..very improved couple of punches there kid.... getting better..keep it up..

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Re: PBL Week Two: CBK -VS- Quix (READY 4 VOTES!!!)

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Asking for help like a job applications?? Job applications don't "Require" help. The company that is hiring is looking for help. The applicant is looking for a job. Uhmmm, nice try though Illok. SMH


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Re: PBL Week Two: CBK -VS- Quix (READY 4 VOTES!!!)

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Lol...in a job application... Its 'asks' sorta speak the aplicant for his name, previous employer, adress etc... personal info. And the help is the job seeker.. ... I shouldve clarified... Anyway... My point is you couldve came up wit another good flip wit the ask for help concept....thats just how i saw it...shit was close

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Re: PBL Week Two: CBK -VS- Quix (READY 4 VOTES!!!)

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"hit a switch" is a term bloods an crips an other gang members use to describe killing people... it was worded fine.

and golden M's is "goldenmics" a site quix visits.

thnx for voting tho.

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Re: PBL Week Two: CBK -VS- Quix (READY 4 VOTES!!!)

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Did not know what hit the switch meant in gangster slang..... Thanks for clarifying cbk..and its goldmic... If thats what ur refering to

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yeah i didn't know what you meant by hit a switch either....thought you meant switchas in hyraulics on a low rider .lol
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Re: PBL Week Two: CBK -VS- Quix (READY 4 VOTES!!!)

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UPPIN !!!!!!!!!

ohhh yeah.. an now i come to think about it i can't actually remember ever askin quix for "help". ?



uppin.......



UPPIN AGAIN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1



uppin again, mods clear the shit in this thread plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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