Killin' Tha Multies.. Feed Plz.

$hayne · Post by **$hayne** » Sat Feb 17, 2007 2:02 pm

I Always Got Some Chips Illegally-Stackin',
Tearin' Emcee's Apart While Strategically-Rappin'.
Gimme A Mic And Ya Gaurenteed-To-Be-Clappin'.
And In My Battles There Needs-To-Be-Action.//
And You Know With Words-Imma-Fuckin'-Wizard,
Everything From Me Ya Heard-Gave-Ya-Tha-Shivers.//
I'm Fly Like A Bird, Plus Brave-Yall-Jus-Some-Quitters.
And Plus You're Way More Of An Amatuer-Spitter,
You Spit So Much Bullshit You Prolly Damage-Ya-Shitter.//
So Step-Bird, You'll Be The Cattle I'll Be The Sheperd
And Ya Girl? I Hit It From The Front And The Back-Too-Left-Her.
Cuz I Got More Mack-Than-Hue-To-Tha-Heffner.//
And What I Say? I Told You In The First-Place-I-Don't-Care-Yo,
Cuz Lyrically I'm More Dangerous Than A Worse-Case-Senerio.//
So Don't Get Mad-At-Me If I Ruin Ya Whole Flow Anatomy
With Words I Shatter-Thee, I'll Leave You Like A Dead Battery.//
And I Don't Lack-Skills, On This Site Imma Stack-Bills,
Like I Was Makin' Some Crack-Deals.//

Stack-Bills = The Money By Your Name.
Hue Heffner = Who Don't Know Who He Is ?

http://illestlyrics.com/board/post25621 ... 5621#25621

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Sat Feb 17, 2007 3:49 pm

Nice I Liked This Alot Your First Half Was ill The Rest Was Good To Some Bars Flowed a Little Choppy But Naa Good Shit

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:22 pm

Didnt really see you Killin any Multies in this, but it was an aight spit, hopefully keyed... Wasnt that impressive and didnt really hold my attention much. Id give this 6/10 jus cuz the title and lack of multies...

precise · Post by **precise** » Sat Feb 17, 2007 9:36 pm

the problem is, first half was ok, and then, you got lazy, like most other emcees, like "k i did this part kinda good ill just slack for the rest" basically, lol i dont like to see that, when you write freaking BRING IT lol

overall, good for a first piece that ive seen from you

Stina · Post by **Stina** » Sun Feb 18, 2007 5:17 pm

great rhyme sceme.. i liked that shit a lot.
and i first i read that you didnt know who Hue Heffner was .. i was about to be like WHAHHHH?!

"Like I Was Makin' Some Crack-Deals.// "
..didnt like that last line as much though ..

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Mon Feb 19, 2007 9:18 am

not trying to be a dick or anything but you didn't really kill any multis, i write more complex than that every drop and i don't think to myself "DAMN YOOOZZ WTFUXORZ I"M KILLING DE MULTIZ"

the first 4 lines were good but you fell off after that, it was alright overall but it wasn't really saying much content wise

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Mon Feb 19, 2007 9:51 am

Yah. You can't really base a rap on multis.

Its the content, multis make the content seem better and make
it more complex.

Killah helped me realize that a long time ago.

precise · Post by **precise** » Mon Feb 19, 2007 10:22 am

multies = icing on the cake

or if youd put icing on a pie itd be the icing on the pie, cause i like pie

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Mon Feb 19, 2007 10:55 am

pies are good without icing so if you're making a lyrical pie with icing you know what you're doing

precise · Post by **precise** » Mon Feb 19, 2007 5:19 pm

hahaha ^^^ WORD!!!!!!!!

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Mon Feb 19, 2007 9:08 pm

Dyz Shyt is Aiight, Makez Enuff Senze To Me, Kepe Doin Ya Thang `1

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