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Post by Kurse »

Who says that it's not polite to brag?

Who cares!?

The newest from my lab..."BRAGGIN MAN"

(the title kinda says it all)

Leave me feed. (though i won't hold my breath...lol)

Written By: R. Bueno
Beat Produced By: R. Bueno
Mixed By: R. Bueno
Recorded @ Dungeon Lab 21 in Lombard, IL

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<param name="quality" value="high">
<param name="wmode" value="transparent">
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**Feed is appreciated because this is actually being made into a music video this week which will be streamed from youtube & myspace. The video will be entered as a submission to the youtube/50 Cent music video contest where the beat & lyrics had to be produced from the same artist.
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Post by 16 Micz »

um, to tell u the truth, i didnt like it, you've used that flow several times too, at the end of your bars, you stretch the last word, to me personally isnt enjoyable, but i mean i definitely see where u were goin wit this, that 50 style beat and everythin, but lookin forward to the video, keep doin your thing
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Post by Momeijah »

Ok, This Was Probably One Of My Favourite Tracks From u, it Was Structured Great And Keep That Voice if u Redo it.

For Advice Though id Say Just Use The Stretched Last Words On The Hook, And The Part Leading Upto The Hook Aswell if u Want, Keep ur Verses Sharp if u Know What i Mean. Because if u Stretch ur Words a Lot it's Gnna Throw The Listener Off a Bit, Fill Up The Beat as Much as u Can. Apart From That, The Delivery And Voice Were Great, Even Though You've Used a Similar Flow i Still Liked it. The Track Was Pretty Good Overall Though, There is Room For improvement So im Giving it a 7.
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AKA SCOTCH HALL, MOE MEIJER & MOMEIJAH.
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

beat was kool,delivery was nice..n the stretchin the word thing...well when u go 2 do the video dont stretch em out as much but u cud still do it...prescense was felt..the song its self i liked..if u werent doing this for a contest id say tone the vocals down but thats all hopefully practiced n ish..but anyways Kurse,this was cool...hopefully it shows the other kats whats good in Chi town..good luck homie..
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Post by Prophet »

The beat was hot, there wasn't anything I didn't like about this one. Though I will say I've heard better from you, but this was still cool.
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Post by Cee4 »

This track was OK. The lyrics were straight apart from the hook. I hated the hook. It was played out and i dont like the way you stretched the words out either. The beat was dope. Iv heard better from you but this was still a solid track. Id give it 7/10.

Good luck with the contest
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Post by Mephisto »

your flow sounds fine, you kept it goin and sounded pretty good, but that beat ain't my style, just gets old fast. keep at it.
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