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The newest from my lab..."BRAGGIN MAN"
(the title kinda says it all)
Leave me feed. (though i won't hold my breath...lol)
Written By: R. Bueno
Beat Produced By: R. Bueno
Mixed By: R. Bueno
Recorded @ Dungeon Lab 21 in Lombard, IL
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**Feed is appreciated because this is actually being made into a music video this week which will be streamed from youtube & myspace. The video will be entered as a submission to the youtube/50 Cent music video contest where the beat & lyrics had to be produced from the same artist.
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um, to tell u the truth, i didnt like it, you've used that flow several times too, at the end of your bars, you stretch the last word, to me personally isnt enjoyable, but i mean i definitely see where u were goin wit this, that 50 style beat and everythin, but lookin forward to the video, keep doin your thing
Ok, This Was Probably One Of My Favourite Tracks From u, it Was Structured Great And Keep That Voice if u Redo it.
For Advice Though id Say Just Use The Stretched Last Words On The Hook, And The Part Leading Upto The Hook Aswell if u Want, Keep ur Verses Sharp if u Know What i Mean. Because if u Stretch ur Words a Lot it's Gnna Throw The Listener Off a Bit, Fill Up The Beat as Much as u Can. Apart From That, The Delivery And Voice Were Great, Even Though You've Used a Similar Flow i Still Liked it. The Track Was Pretty Good Overall Though, There is Room For improvement So im Giving it a 7.
For Advice Though id Say Just Use The Stretched Last Words On The Hook, And The Part Leading Upto The Hook Aswell if u Want, Keep ur Verses Sharp if u Know What i Mean. Because if u Stretch ur Words a Lot it's Gnna Throw The Listener Off a Bit, Fill Up The Beat as Much as u Can. Apart From That, The Delivery And Voice Were Great, Even Though You've Used a Similar Flow i Still Liked it. The Track Was Pretty Good Overall Though, There is Room For improvement So im Giving it a 7.


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beat was kool,delivery was nice..n the stretchin the word thing...well when u go 2 do the video dont stretch em out as much but u cud still do it...prescense was felt..the song its self i liked..if u werent doing this for a contest id say tone the vocals down but thats all hopefully practiced n ish..but anyways Kurse,this was cool...hopefully it shows the other kats whats good in Chi town..good luck homie..
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