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- drunken jesus
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the echo doesn't kill off the static, it just makes the static echo, i dunno i couldn't really listen to it cause the echo annoyed the hell out of me
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

- TheNobleOne
- Elite Freestyler
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Re: All Star Mode
i wasnt feelin this at all. mix was all off man. your energy was good but didnt match this beat at all. your flow was aite but you werent even on beat most of the time. it just sounded like you were reading straight off the paper. i just suggest on tightening up all areas of your game. keep doin tracks and elevate.
- RedRacRecords
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Re: All Star Mode
The first thing i think you should do is take out the delay or lower it 35-50% because its interfering with your verse in a major way. I like the originality of the beat and topic, you doing it justice in that way. From what I can make out you got a cassidy type flow, if this ain't a freestyle you should spend a little more time gettin used to your verse before you record it. If its a freestyle then ups. I can't really judge this joint to well cuz of the delay.
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- FlipSide
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Re: All Star Mode
Dope Beat....Shit Echo... Fell Off A Couple Times..Cant Say Much About It tho.. Its Old And It Is What It Is...
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- TheNobleOne
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Re: All Star Mode
i got tracks from 3 years ago that murder this man, just sayin. dont talk about how old this is after you get some feedback that you didnt like.
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Re: All Star Mode
Haha woooooow
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