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Post by RH1NO »

haha

good shit the beat was fire

felt the energy from you on this

lyrics were good flow was pretty good

the echo kinda killed it for me though i would say , and no hate

to do it again without the echo in ya voice

but overall it was a fun listen nice drop

stay up
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

yeah the beat was nice as hell, vocals were kinda lax and low, were you dissin lawgix on this???
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Post by SlickMex »

Pauses were kinda annoying..but yea i liked it..and i think i have that beat..lyrics were nice..
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Post by Dead Silence »

oh shit i forgot to leave feed my bad

i thought it was pretty hot

like rh1no said tha echo kinda killed it and vocals were a tad 2 low keep it up
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lol
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Post by Cee4 »

this was good. will sound even better when you get a better mic. keep it up
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Post by drunken jesus »

the echo doesn't kill off the static, it just makes the static echo, i dunno i couldn't really listen to it cause the echo annoyed the hell out of me
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Post by Young K »

that was pretty hott...
i did a song with a similar beat maybe ill post it sometime...
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Post by Mephisto »

I like ur flow just not the echo, other then that pretty well done. Something a bit different, i heard someone do something like this only with the nfl song ha.
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Post by MesaR »

Yeah It Was Alright, ur gettin better every drop you do

beat was good vocals were a tad soft, and i agree the echo was abit eh..

but yeah anways it was pretty nice
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i wasnt feelin this at all. mix was all off man. your energy was good but didnt match this beat at all. your flow was aite but you werent even on beat most of the time. it just sounded like you were reading straight off the paper. i just suggest on tightening up all areas of your game. keep doin tracks and elevate.
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Post by RedRacRecords »

The first thing i think you should do is take out the delay or lower it 35-50% because its interfering with your verse in a major way. I like the originality of the beat and topic, you doing it justice in that way. From what I can make out you got a cassidy type flow, if this ain't a freestyle you should spend a little more time gettin used to your verse before you record it. If its a freestyle then ups. I can't really judge this joint to well cuz of the delay.
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Dope Beat....Shit Echo... Fell Off A Couple Times..Cant Say Much About It tho.. Its Old And It Is What It Is...
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i got tracks from 3 years ago that murder this man, just sayin. dont talk about how old this is after you get some feedback that you didnt like.
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Haha woooooow

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