OH SNAP ..this is OLDDDDD. i wrote it about 2 or 3 years ago, still one of my favorite writings though. Oh and "Ana" is short for Anorexia.
you'll never notice it
well at least not at first
its not a disease
its a disorder, a curse
people would tease - "she's so fat"
but now shes too thin
everytime her hunger grew
she controlled it
she ate once a while
but later threw it up
gums sore, mouth bled
she became less healthy then she was
her family was concerned
she only weighed seventy-nine
her doctor warned if she got to sixty
her body could shut down, she could die
she payed no mind
her parents forced her to eat
she began taking laxitives, water pills
she cried herself to sleep
her skeletal frame
her hair thinning, falling out
her skin turning gray
she lost control, then passed out
she lays now
underneath a heavy stone
she was starving for perfection
but she wasnt alone
many people dont understand
many others do
anorexia nervosa
has taken the lives of others too
you'll never notice it
well at least not at first
its not a disease
its a disorder, a curse
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one of the most poetic pieces in this section, it was straight some of it was sloppy but overall it was pretty well put together
good job representing fat bitches
good job representing fat bitches
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
wow that was a very good poem! I loved it! so creepy and terrible.
she ate once a while
but later threw it up
gums sore, mouth bled
she became less healthy then she was
she payed no mind
her parents forced her to eat
she began taking laxitives, water pills
she cried herself to sleep
^^^^my fav parts of it
props!
she ate once a while
but later threw it up
gums sore, mouth bled
she became less healthy then she was
she payed no mind
her parents forced her to eat
she began taking laxitives, water pills
she cried herself to sleep
^^^^my fav parts of it
props!
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ima have to agree wit DJ on this.....i thought the intro n outro was a pretty good idea for it.....being that its 2 or 3 years old...lol u were packin poem skills back then huh..hahhaa...u should keep at it for sure.....i demand another one!!..hahaha...
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this was some really good stuff stina... very well done... 8/10 congrats keep it up!
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