just came out within a half an hour or so..
i wonder how life would be if different decisions were made
lieing under a fake exterior and my vision is going insane
sometimes i question my future, my past and my present
what would happen if i had succeeded in what i had intended?
what if one day I just lost it, stand before my line and cross it
would these devils release from hiding within my closet?
i wanna know.. who would mourn, who would rejoyce?
i'm screaming to this world, yet im silent with no voice
what if i dont leap when a train is headin my way?
instantly i'd decease, but that's only for cowards play
i sound a bit psychotic, but these thoughts cant be forgotten
my life so crazy and chaotic, i feel as if my mind is rottin
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niiiiice I was feelin' the whole poem! very good drop!
yep as I said the whole poem was great but this bar was my fav:
what if one day I just lost it, stand before my line and cross it
would these devils release from hiding within my closet?
yep as I said the whole poem was great but this bar was my fav:
what if one day I just lost it, stand before my line and cross it
would these devils release from hiding within my closet?


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this isnt as emo as u stated in the title...i was expecting...slit wrists n loneliness n pitty n bullshit!...lol
this was definatley a good piece...i liked it...alot...i could relate to some of the things u said.....i dont really like that train line...my friend took himself out by train...but other than that..it was dope...lol..keep it up...ur gettin better everytime i see u drop a piece
this was definatley a good piece...i liked it...alot...i could relate to some of the things u said.....i dont really like that train line...my friend took himself out by train...but other than that..it was dope...lol..keep it up...ur gettin better everytime i see u drop a piece


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