READ AND COMMENT BITCHES plz? <3

LadySam · Post by **LadySam** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 10:28 pm

http://illestlyrics.com/board/my-multi- ... t3752.html

i was actually saving this for the sams audio but it didnt work out how i wanted it to
soooooooo here it goess!
feedback bitches

Were so hot, these bois want to 'snap, crackle, and pop.'
The other females here don't no whether to rap, tackle or stop.
Hip hop, wants a taste of us, piss off, we ladies are danger-us
Got cute nails, right style, slamin hair,
Just to tease these boys and give them girls something to stare.
Beware, we'll give u a scare, like a couple a kids playing
Truth or dare.
Sams the name, triple the game, triple the fame
Lady, fiasco, blitz, now theres something to make u skitz.
We'll tear you to bits, scare you to ur wits, shiver till you
Hit the pit, and then make you plead the fifth.

Hit the pit = hit peaking point

Momeijah · Post by **Momeijah** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 11:27 pm

Were so hot, these bois want to 'snap, crackle, and pop.'
The other females here don't no whether to rap, tackle or stop.
Hip hop, wants a taste of us, piss off, we ladies are danger-us
^Fav Lines, Nice Multis n Some Cool Punches, Flowed Nice The Whole Way Thru And yes Do it On Audio it Sounds Good Lol Keep it Up

LadySam · Post by **LadySam** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 11:29 pm

ty ty and maybe i will audio it haha

precise · Post by **precise** » Fri Feb 16, 2007 1:47 am

yea good call, i think itd fit nicely in an audio with the other sams

first bar was great your gettin into the multies now good job

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Fri Feb 16, 2007 1:52 am

the intro was definitely catchy with the multis, quite a unique style.. not something i'd prefer but definitely entertaining.. an audio would be nice too if it flows the way i imagine, overall it was nice

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Fri Feb 16, 2007 3:14 am

ooooowwwheeeeeee...lol...nice verse...it was short...u had some pretty nice rhyme schemes goin on....keep it up...

~*Blitz*~ · Post by **~*Blitz*~** » Fri Feb 16, 2007 4:21 am

SAM!! I am so proud of you!! HAWTNESS <3 good job shits hawt

|.R.SON.aLL.| · Post by **|.R.SON.aLL.|** » Fri Feb 16, 2007 6:50 am

Were so hot, these bois want to 'snap, crackle, and pop.'
The other females here don't no whether to rap, tackle or stop.

^^ .. Tha Multies Were Sick in This Bar yo` ..
i Liked This Piece ..
ya Style is Very Different From Everyone On This Board ..
U Should Began to Use More Punches ..
Develop Some Creativity ..
ya`Know ??..
Good Read Though ..

LadySam · Post by **LadySam** » Fri Feb 16, 2007 7:20 am

ty relly and ty for the feedback everyone! i need more coz im greedy

Stina · Post by **Stina** » Fri Feb 16, 2007 7:25 am

lovin on the top lines
"snap crackle an pop" vs "rap, tackle or stop"
^ thats hot right thurrr

LadySam · Post by **LadySam** » Fri Feb 16, 2007 7:40 am

ty ty

*.HarleQuin.* · Post by ***.HarleQuin.*** » Fri Feb 16, 2007 9:22 am

lol = )

Typeo · Post by **Typeo** » Fri Feb 16, 2007 6:25 pm

You've already shown this to me, and you know my response.

You've got some fire, you just need to give it all at once. I love your verse here, keep it up. I want to hear more from you.

LadySam · Post by **LadySam** » Fri Feb 16, 2007 6:32 pm

i did show u huh?i think i showed a few ppl
its a lil old lol but oh well
thanks for the feedbackkkkkkkkkk muthafuckers
more? ty <3 haha

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Fri Feb 16, 2007 10:20 pm

yea its good though im not interesting in listening to lebos on mic.

READ AND COMMENT BITCHES plz? <3

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