What do you think?

[DaPoet]

People change like time feel like a philosopher every time I rhyme/ The diamond in the rough waiting to get his shine/ Preaching like Mandela without a glass box haters throwing disses like mass rocks/ Haters saying it ain't my time like human clocks/ Rapping spiritual lyrics to my deathbed i'm addicted to this game like a methhead/ Feel the words Jesus said while breaking the bread/ Still contemplating words unsaid/ Screw this there's new land ready to tread/

[eMCee Havic]

this was allright not that great, structure was fucked off
improve the structure improve the flow

peace

[FlipSide]

u fucking suck... stop faking the funk... punk bitch

[Lawgix]

u fucking suck... stop faking the funk... punk bitch

damn speak it like it is... don't hold back anything Flip!

three words for ya tho bro.... Center Of Elevation

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/center-elevation.html