Welcome to Illest Lyrics forum established in 2005.
----
Free Vapes

The Runaway

Drop your written rhymes in one of the largest collections of original rhymes on the internet. The feedback in our Written Rhymes section will simply amaze you.

Moderators: Loon E Lou, Enlightend

Post Reply
User avatar
QwarterZ
Rap Professional
Offline
Posts: 1688
Joined: Thu Oct 29, 2009 7:01 am
Wins: 4
Losses: 9

The Runaway

Post by QwarterZ »

They started by cutting off each sector
saying all we shown was this diseased pleasure
for keeping measures, unaccounted for
they surrounded mine, then surrounded yours
guns shots rattle out the chamber, all life
run's out, as if they were the stars of all night
skies...circulated like the breath of a marathon
runner, the gunner trailed each one, "cherish dawn"
he yelled as he threw a pair of bombs, *BLAST*
as doors flew from hinges, I made my escape, fast
cowardly act, but I can't face the power he had
a youth, that couldn't even tower thee past
I slipped on a stump, stumbling to the outskirts
I couldn't tell you the time of each hour....
fallen into a deep sleep, my mind hit like a percussion
then awoken again, by a ill mannered substance
a sour taste consumed the air, "Who Is There"
bellowed a shadow, I didn't presume to share
as foul birds cried, as if to say "doom is near"
I couldn't get up, so all I did was choose to stare
you could hear the wind pass through the fabric
as the air carried it, soon lit up the lantern
as I saw a face with a pattern, stare back unmoved
he uttered the words that shutter my soul
Death Becomes You....
upset, disgruntled, I can envision a mastermind's eyes
he said I was a stray cat, who shouldn't accumulate 9 lives
his words befuddled the mind, "None as subtle as I"
the lantern swung as a clock that struggled with time
without hesitance, I grabbed the nearest rock and sent it quick
he grasped it in his palm as if no pain was ever sensed
scoffed at my negligence, and continued to taunt me with secrecy
he said "You will never be at peace...The nightmares are dreams of speech"
dumbfounded, I found myself speechless, "Seize thy tongue"
as embers burnt from the tree, flew past, all I could think is RUN
I stumbled to my feet, and dashed to the nearest shrub
still remembering what his appearance was, fear overcomes
I slid down a hill, bumped my head on a decaying fence
slept somberly, once again I see him, creating the faintest breath
he said wash your face, and as I assembled myself to take each step
I looked into the pond, as my pain circulated, and I became nauseous
I realized the tree, held nothing, I saw no one, dealing with my subconscious
see I have a problem, I can't grasp the sense of reality
I can't speak out loud, so my mind creates each happening
so this entity is a scrap of me, dissected from my anatomy
replacing the weak and soft spoken, with bravery and calamity
I'm battling my own opus, whether awake or asleep, fate
plays with my mind, easily manipulating the actions we made....
sadly as the scheme plays out this world of mine seems strange
because I've been on the run for so long hiding between each grave
I must have caused this emptiness that you see.....wait....
I burned down the town last night for playing these games
now the law is out to get me, as I rearrange each pace
each step, each movement...............................each day




Image

This was a no show verse for a topical league....*sigh*
User avatar
FlipSide
Flow Creation
Flow Creation
Offline
Posts: 1473
Joined: Fri Mar 19, 2010 9:37 am
Wins: 0
Losses: 0
Location: Chicago IL
Contact:

Re: The Runaway

Post by FlipSide »

upset, disgruntled, I can envision a mastermind's eyes
he said I was a stray cat, who shouldn't accumulate 9 lives
his words befuddled the mind, "None as subtle as I"
the lantern swung as a clock that struggled with time
without hesitance, I grabbed the nearest rock and sent it quick
he grasped it in his palm as if no pain was ever sensed
scoffed at my negligence, and continued to taunt me with secrecy
he said "You will never be at peace...The nightmares are dreams of speech"
dumbfounded, I found myself speechless, "Seize thy tongue"
as embers burnt from the tree, flew past, all I could think is RUN
I stumbled to my feet, and dashed to the nearest shrub
still remembering what his appearance was, fear overcomes
I slid down a hill, bumped my head on a decaying fence
slept somberly, once again I see him, creating the faintest breath
he said wash your face, and as I assembled myself to take each step
I looked into the pond, as my pain circulated, and I became nauseous
I realized the tree, held nothing, I saw no one, dealing with my subconscious
This Right Here I Read As If I Was Reading A Book Engrossed In The Story...VERY Descriptive And Fluid

I Could See Why Dude No Showed LMAO..... GREAT Drop... i Dont Say That Often...
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
̿ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\з=(•̪•)=ε/̵͇̿̿/'̿'̿ ̿ -
Image
User avatar
mint condition
Rookie
Offline
Posts: 23
Joined: Mon Jun 14, 2010 12:49 pm
Wins: 1
Losses: 1

Re: The Runaway

Post by mint condition »

yeah man you are really good i read "beauty" and i liked that alot but it had 8 replies already so i checked this one out too. everything ive read so far is solid. really nice job< im too tired to go into depth but i read it 3 times so so i could absorb it and i say it is genuinely fine work. peace bro.
User avatar
- Mutual -
Supreme Lyricist
Offline
Posts: 4442
Joined: Wed Apr 09, 2008 2:01 am
Wins: 5
Losses: 11
Location: Dont Live In One

Re: The Runaway

Post by - Mutual - »

man this would have been nice in a tourney, like flip said it was us pulled in like a book, the description was great it conveyed the message well man major propz on this i enjoyed reading this shit

upset, disgruntled, I can envision a mastermind's eyes
he said I was a stray cat, who shouldn't accumulate 9 lives
his words befuddled the mind, "None as subtle as I"
the lantern swung as a clock that struggled with time

very dope imo, keep this shit comin man
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
Image
Post Reply

Return to “Written Rhymes”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 17 guests