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Same Ole
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Re: Same Ole
need a pro tools recording program, lyrics were nice though. but i feel like you could put more feeling into your words, more a emotion ya kno. put i give it a 6/10 definatly could of been better, but liked it none the less
peace
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"see you shouldnt be afraid of me..
you should be afraid of all the people in the streets
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Re: Same Ole
^ i agree
need a bit more emotion
nice lyrics tho not too choppy
slightly hard to hear nothin crazy
overall not too bad
keep'em comin
need a bit more emotion
nice lyrics tho not too choppy
slightly hard to hear nothin crazy
overall not too bad
keep'em comin
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
Re: Same Ole
Yeah, You Need To AMPLIFY Your Track, It's Hard Too Hear. Also, Like What Was Already Said I Need To That Emotion So I Can Believe That You Mean What You Say. Lyrics Are Okay Though.
Respect.
Respect.
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