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Same Ole

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Just a test in recorded rap

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its hard to hear..
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Re: Same Ole

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need a pro tools recording program, lyrics were nice though. but i feel like you could put more feeling into your words, more a emotion ya kno. put i give it a 6/10 definatly could of been better, but liked it none the less

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"see you shouldnt be afraid of me..
you should be afraid of all the people in the streets
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^ i agree
need a bit more emotion
nice lyrics tho not too choppy
slightly hard to hear nothin crazy
overall not too bad
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Re: Same Ole

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Yeah, You Need To AMPLIFY Your Track, It's Hard Too Hear. Also, Like What Was Already Said I Need To That Emotion So I Can Believe That You Mean What You Say. Lyrics Are Okay Though.

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