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Cee4
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Duc3 wrote:LoL I Know You Ain't Calling Me Corney?

lmao im talking in generals here. i dont even know who you are son
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nice rhyme scheme..appealled to the eye..the flow was good at parts others not as well...but i couldnt see the diss..? no personals,..only wordplay and such..try delivering that next time instead of amping a rhymescheme with multies...other than that

good job.
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LoL good times..good times
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yeah it is what it is...you had some tight lines..and I
think the flow on this one was better than with our battle..



You Roarin At A Vet?!?!?!...I'll Let Tha Gun Have An Abortion In Ya Chest....Ya Moms Will Scream Out ALPHA!?!?! Like Sorrorities With Tourettes


^^^^they right about that..this was hella clever dawg^^^^^^

your still a dick..haha but it is what it is...that shit's
good from a battle stand point.. props..
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