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Alpha Bill,Harle Quin..[Diss] - Fatal(Finale)

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[align=center]Large Lessons Gawd Blessin Givin Dem Mourn Beyond Physical Form,
Invincible Don My Spirit Is Gone I'm Here To Deliver Tha Storm
Unpenetrable Arms,My Lyrics Are Bomb,This Statistic Was Born,
One Morn Before Harle Or Bitches Could Warn,Crooks Drawn..
Bill...I Don't Remember Dude Imbecile
My Relentless Crew Should Of Finished You...I Grip An Rip Denim Loose,
Diminish Through Ya Infant Threshold Fuck This Defendents Ghetto
Yeah Bro..They'll Reap An Lace Ya Flesh Up...So...
I'll Retrieve An Take Tha Chedda Just To Alleviate Tha Pressure,
Then Abbreviate My Lesser, As He Grieve An Waits For Betta,
Then Tha Thieves Abraise His Dresser,Demons Leave Tha Hate Forever,
Bill Hush.. We Can See Ya Pace Is Severed,
Die Slow ..Ya Hopeless Childs Are Concieved An Pray For Effort,
Convicts Dream An Stray From Records,My Weapons Displayed In Seconds
War Im Declarin My Lyrics Raw No Comparin...
You Niggas Are Like Runnin Favors etc..I'll Leave Ya On (Air And...)Errands
You Roarin At A Vet?!?!?!...I'll Let Tha Gun Have An Abortion In Ya Chest....Ya Moms Will Scream Out ALPHA!?!?! Like Sorrorities With Tourettes..Tha Authorities Dip Tha Set..Glory Is In My Rep..Dey Know I'l.
I Bounce'em While He's Grouchin... Nigga....They Know You Slouchin,
Bill Ya Skillz Are Like Kids Weekly Earnings...We No You Allow Wins!(Allowance)
Hoish We Doubt HIM!?!...The World Would Be Better Without SLIM!

Harle You Bubble Gum Bitch Baby Trouble Some Trick Lady
I'll Bust On Ya Tits Maybe....You Lovin This Dick Lately?
She Was Clutchin My Shift Greatly...
You Know You Was Suffocated By This Dick
You Hummin Ain Tha Only Time You Feel Vibration On Ya Lips...
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Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

you sure that was a diss to me or any girl in the world?
next time use some personals, make it sting..
or just dont get butt hurt when u dont know what ur talking
about either way make sure u DISS me next time
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Post by Omega Bill »

Do you know how to diss somebody? Like at all? Using nameplay and wordplay isn't a diss you malignant piece of shit.
Duc3 wrote:LoL They Only Asked You Homie Because You Was The Only One There...Like Game Of Pick Up Basketball You're A Player Short And You See A Nigga On The Side Line...Course You Gone Ask'em To Play...Same Story With You Alpha Bitch.
Or the fact that I'm cool with all of them? You're nothing but a battler. You can't write for shit because your writing doesn't pass nameplay and wordplay. It's sad to see you wasting your time with all these disses when the only views they get is me.
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Post by Newsince »

LOL....Don't get Pussy Hurt kids its just text.


Flow was solid throughout, needed More Punches.

But the tourettes shit was on point my dood.
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Post by Arvincible »

Yeah duc3 got my props on this drop, nice multis nice flow, it had the whole "die slow" atmosphere to first part which I was really feelin, and I was diggin the gun abortion line, too.


Good shit duc3 ur spittin fir3.
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Post by - Mutual - »

yeah props in this drop man sum of ya best lines in this script so ya know
nice flow multies on point jus needed a bit extra but other wise good shit
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

I Don't See How Nameplay isn't a Diss? ..
It`s Usin Somebody Else`s Name On Them ..
It`s Embrassin By Breakin and Rippin They Name Apart ..
So I Disagree Bout That Statement
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.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Newsince »

Yeah Its A Punch And A personal.
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Post by DressToKill »

Good diss dude..multies were on point and you were doing ya thang..nice spit and keep up duke
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Post by thaphantom »

hahahaha i give that to you. shit was decent. and i understand what harle was saying you kinda came more at bill than her. you need to make some more direct hits. but this was nice. some pretty good lines. multi's and everything. oh and ya punches you delivered them nicely but you need to bring more of them like someone else said. but the whole thing was nice. props to you man
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Post by Arvincible »

well Harle is hard to make personals with.. lol
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Post by Cee4 »

nice flow and multis. a couple of good punchlines. apart from that it was either forced or didnt make sense
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Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

Arvincible wrote:well Harle is hard to make personals with.. lol
ask around you can find dozens, ppl need to start doing research maybe verses will be more original
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Post by Cee4 »

*.HarleQuin.* wrote:
Arvincible wrote:well Harle is hard to make personals with.. lol
ask around you can find dozens, ppl need to start doing research maybe verses will be more original

no point in personals on illest these days. a line an a half of forced multis followed by some stretched/corny wordplay/punchline should do it.
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