^agreed.. you started out strong but it got choppy but the meanings still hit hard maybe we could collab you speak my language man hit me up

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First 2 bars don't like, next 2 bars clever, the rest.... Dope!!!!! Love it any real emcee can relate to this it should be called "the real emcees anthem"

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sounds cool [fuck all the technical shit dude(@leeroi green)] its an art no? i dont care who how what or why fuck it i write to write if someone wants to get us to network fuck it im down great idea man! :) if u wanna get my vibe.. i tend to wright about things that make you think every line is ...

Have you seein double

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so your pussy that rhymes like in doctor Seuss
well ill take this cat in a hat and hang him by a noose

sickle cell rhymer

yo to any real hiphop head this IS THERAPY ! :) and your right dont doubt yourself whatever you write is from your head so usually only you can read it exactly how its suppose to be.. "my lyrics take care of me, they therapy, get shit off my chest" -Dilated Peoples (worst comes to worst) <-check it ...

i can definitely tell your still in a what i call "poet stage" that's how i started too.. try writing to music get sum instrumentals and feel the beat.. with practice it will come naturally without even having a beat and you will be able to have a good flow... remember its a lot more than just end ...

thanks man thats how i like to write make you think and every line has a meaning i dont battle i write... look forward to hearing what you got to say

~UNDERGROUND; WHERE REAL HIPHOP IS FOUND~

Your livin in the present, and the future is irrelevant,
your stuntin your development, lacking lifes essential elements,
forever meant to settle like sediment, its evident, take a look at the evidence,
and separate the real from the nonsense, its all there in your subconscious, makin you ...

Born the year Nas started I'm cut from the Age of Dope The Substance Era.. Substituted My physical with my soul

Dope man Dopeeee.... That line right there is what everyone would know this song for I can hear a whole fuckin audience repeating this bar

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ahhhh weed central haha damn man im in soCal L.A. the city of angels

hes staring at the fan on his ceiling,
with a mad crooked feeling,
and every second that hes killing,
he can feel his soul chilling,
with an ice box where his heart used to be,
his temperature drops like negative 32 degrees,
so inhale exhale breathe deep deep breaths,
his chest compressed ...

when i lost my soul i had to look deep within myself, and when i lost my voice i had to listen to my inner self,
when i lost my love i couldnt feel my heart beating, and when i lost sight of you i couldnt keep living..

am i stuck in a dream grasped by reality, clenched in the fist of time stunting ...

you doin alright i say keep it more live you need to pull people in with some more cleverness here and there but ey i feel some passion towards the end if u really feelin that then good let it all out man no holding back