Demonic Devolution

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Not sure if I should record this yet or not or whether or not to add another verse, need some feedback first. I wrote it to this beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GV1IYp_zkB8


Verse 1
Here, here, here, come cradle in my claws
I'll rip apart your frame exposing your inner flaws
Like red-dead redemption but no cowboys or repentin'
Heads fed a new dimension on these lyric webs i'm spinnin'
Step in with a grin an', then I get to sinnin'
Never will I mention the results of my invention
Dark side of a nocturne, hot rhythm making the clock burn
Never has a thought spurned or fled from the flocked wyrm
You've grown a phobia of my mind controllin' ya
Ain't no need to worry 'cause I'll be the one explodin' ya
Step to the next crew because my shit will flesh through
A full grown full blown organ zoo who's next? you
Trap you in my vices to show you what pain and strife is
I know I'm not the nicest 'cause I'll toss you out the life dish
Understand the message if you're stressed with all these questions
My underhanded tactics will bless me with your intestines



Verse 2
An uppercut, through the gut, popped a nut, cop a blunt?
Maybe it'll alleviate, all the stress, on your cunt
My dark flow just rolls pushes me to grow mo'
Stand out and straight glow incandescent red soul
I never ever been told why these chills caught your cold
Latched on and bashed in dagger makes skin exposed
Cackling and clattering, what you saw was just a smattering
Spatter of organs shattering your skull receives a battering
Roam in dark halls ghostly figure glued to blood walls
Hear my warped calls resonate through all the grudged laws
A deep dark prison the only sense a cold incision
Reflective steel vision reveals all with precision
Hear me burst through your fuckin' monotone bars
Have you seeing your chromosome pieces in the stars
I'll leave you feeling weak with diseases sent from Mars
You're running out of gas but now they're calling all cars

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You paint a picture or should i say masterpiece i love when i can read something and the imagery plays in my head dope man keep it up! where u located??

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Thanks a lot, man. And I'm on the very edge of the west coast, in the Emerald Triangle.

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ahhhh weed central haha damn man im in soCal L.A. the city of angels