im diggin the song mane. the hook was my favorite part. im liking the concept as well. keep it pushin

good shit lou, youre still goin steady i see

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ayy thanks man i appreciate it, i need all the suggestions i can get. I didnt try to hard to perfect this one cuz im only recording on a shitty $100 mic i have in my room. Im hopin to get to usin a full studio next year off at school. but about the song i actually used eminems song infinite as the ...

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My pen and paper cause the same reaction
when my words get to blastin all these rhymes that a nigga stashin
cuz periodically
i unleash my rhymes diabolically
twist em round ya head now i own you like some property
ill rant yo ass to a trance
my minds so deep i enhance you ...

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ya know the deal.

some shit i was messin around with. i know the mixing is bad, i just record on a shitty mic. tell me what you think. comments/suggestions


Lyrics
Im just a young smart nigga that made it out the hood
close my eyes to the bad and focused on the good
but the hood kept pullin, so a nigga had to push ...

this is hot. your lyrics are on point man

@lou thanks man i appreciate it. jus remember to drive slow!

-- Tue Aug 02, 2011 2:27 pm --

@rhyme master thanks man i appreciate it. this is actually just the beat from drive slow by kanye

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@tretru its actually the instrumental to the jay-z song feelin it. the hook is already part of the beat so ill take no props for that. but thanks for the feedback!

this is a cool song man i like the topic. what site where you in a contest on?

i actually finished my 2nd verse right before i recorded and i wanted to record the song before i lost the flow so i never really got the chance to memorize to 2nd verse. but i think ill definitely memorize before recording from now on. and good lookin on the suggestions they help out a lot yall

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what do you guys think?