Infinite

[aglazey132]

Comments/suggestions

My pen and paper cause the same reaction
when my words get to blastin all these rhymes that a nigga stashin
cuz periodically
i unleash my rhymes diabolically
twist em round ya head now i own you like some property
ill rant yo ass to a trance
my minds so deep i enhance you with a glance
uhhh, i call it hypnosis
this shit is potent for a rodent, ya folly,
you should prolly only take two doses.
the shit im postin got your head spinnin,
the shit im spittin seems fittin,
it could prolly help explain my mission.
i gotta vision of it bumpin like pistons cuz the rhymes that im kickin is comin straight, from out my crimson.
and when it drips i bet it make the track glisten.
so play this back pimpin
and make sure you take a listen.

Hook

fuck it,
i let the beat commence so i can treat the sense to them thats on the fence,
catch a neat repent, on their knees like im heaven sent,
youre harvey dent,
all you boys rappin two faced.
lyin on the track watch me hang em like shoelace.
extermination like a crusade.
like a due date,
im your father you should get to runnin for your crews sake.
mcs are too fake.
annoying like a toothache.
my words resonate you can barely make the booth shake.
i cause an earthquake,
your rhymes are weak like a souffle,
your words are meek and bleak, boy just take it with a touche.
thinkin bout it now you might get lost in translation,
this oration deserves some mothafuckin adoration.
some approbation for this adaptation that im sprayin.
i walk my own path check the trail that im blazin

hook

now i get evidence im heaven sent, ive had these wings like ever since i took it on myself to do some ill shit that represents the tc,
i spit quick, boy i got agility,
i mastered my abilities so all the world be feelin me, like a molester.
nobodies better.
so when you study me boy you gon owe me like a debtor.
as i... get to lecturing, your rhymes get to pestering.
the crowds never satisfied until they hear the best of me.
so the epitome, is to question your validity.
simplicity, i flow with fluidity.
add a lil rapidity, my flow is my affinity, this is my nativity, consider it soliloquoy.
when i, get to bustin.
im soul touchin.
my fingers clutchin on the mic, i linger like the dark knight.
then attack,
fool check these boys raps.
now play this shit back mothafucka its a wrap.
boy im infinite

[Slicka]

That is kinda like OLD SCHOOL FLOW> THE BEAT IS HEAVY WIT BASS..... lyrics is tight but on a better beat i think you could of murdered this jus work on the structure some more...try n fill all the gaps inbetween.... maybe some ad libs or end words might add some pressence to certain parts that you want to stand out. this way okay tho. what do you record on?

[aglazey132]

ayy thanks man i appreciate it, i need all the suggestions i can get. I didnt try to hard to perfect this one cuz im only recording on a shitty $100 mic i have in my room. Im hopin to get to usin a full studio next year off at school. but about the song i actually used eminems song infinite as the inspiration to it and thats why the beat sounds ol school. the hook is ems too.