gunshots echo in the night, hood theme
bitches on they grind since they was fourteen
teens with inf beams and false dreams
toss and turn at nights getting no sleep
sent to school the next day but don't eat -
no breakfast it's reckless but they won't speak
walk a mile in they shoes nigga, both feet ...

That was good you show a lot of potential

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thanks for the propz.

check it:

where i'm from it's either pine box or prison
mothers send they sons outside hoping god be with em
its kinda dark on these streets many ...

the first verse was dope.

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nENjarUHCNw[/video]



i be a beast on the beat like a monster on a drum
while u think about it i be on to the next one
on on to the next one
serve ya like a restaurant
don’t stand and fight, no nigga, you best run
spell it backwards what u get? You get redrum ...

meh

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uR3NvXwZKro

what really is the point of it all?
says the alcoholic hunched over the toilet falling asleep in the hall
everyday is a blur, fucking memory is stalled
empty shell a robot walking around lost in the mall
got a daughter yeah i love but i'm barely involved ...

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what really is the point of it all?<br/>
says the alcoholic hunched over the toilet falling asleep ...

yo...

never confront me you better off running away
quit fronting: you gay / sweeter than a rose bouquet
it's your ass if you chose to stay / approach me? nay
breakfast tray cuz you can get the toast today
get on your knees / hope and pray grab your rosary
fuck hot i be colder than a frozen lake ...

For future reference, when doing a rap battle, try to attack the other person, not s single line you just dropped had anything to do with Jaxx. SMH

It's not like I can see the dude to diss his clothing, style etc etc

but check it, I can flip and diss you though/ tackle you like judo

attack u ...

DemManz wrote:

Most Interesting Man wrote:Is rarted a word?

How rarted of you to think that bumberclart.

Stop trying to talk like you Jamaican.

then step to the butcher/listen close I might lose ya
whether u type shit or a mic user
lyrical moves like Camasutra/no camera when i shoot ya
administer a thorough beating
kill ya for no reason/so cold my toes freezing
kidnapped 4 hoes these evening so fast they nose bleeding
the flow's sickening ...