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Gimme a reason to stay in

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uR3NvXwZKro

what really is the point of it all?
says the alcoholic hunched over the toilet falling asleep in the hall
everyday is a blur, fucking memory is stalled
empty shell a robot walking around lost in the mall
got a daughter yeah i love but i'm barely involved
her fucking mother's whore on another man's balls
no i'm not feeling better i'm bitter
like a flower that's withered where does
it end
where does it start?
think with your head or your heart?
where is the path?
i feel buried deep down in the dark
slowly tearing apart
I hate this mirror it's smashed
then
I gawk at the gash
i'm bleeding,chest heaving, wrist veins slashed
go out into the public hide the pain with a mask
as it is right now just staying alive is a task
but i'm failing, falling feel like bailing, inhaling
weed smoke but never praying, nope, that's just delaying
i'm gonna
die anyway whats the use in me playing?
who the fuck feels what i'm saying?
the art of wisdom is fading
as i sit there graying. decaying
the whole world descends into mayhem
gimme me a reason to stay in
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Re: Gimme a reason to stay in

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That was good you show a lot of potential

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Moneymaker wrote:That was good you show a lot of potential

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thanks for the propz.

check it:

where i'm from it's either pine box or prison
mothers send they sons outside hoping god be with em
its kinda dark on these streets many lost they vision
ended up fucked up, wrong positions
selling coke, locked up no pot to piss in
all for the CREAM caught in narcissism
tell me it's gonna get better some days
hope floats on the same flood washing the menace away
u depressed? take this pill is what the doctor would say
medicated thoughts are faded resolve slowly decay
rob, steal, hustle, work say what u may I gotta get paid
what's my motivation? Earth in rotation
no patience fuck this rock and roll station
i need quiet when i'm meditating
spit something so hot i got Satan waiting


ah fuck it i'm out
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