6 bars

str8 battle no topic

due date sunday night

nah no audio..
text...

fatalx 6 bars

str8 battle no topic

due date sunday night

^^King Nep^^

shit anyone... dont know how to set it up so whoever commin at me yall set it up

very nice

shit im down as well..whenever bro

thanx n i'll make sure to make my flows complex

yeah i just realized what you talkin about

i'll be sure to do that next time

i dont really edit or anything

i just write whats on my mind and post

yeah i felt that it was too short as well after i posted it but

still wanted the feedback on it ya know

and i'll work on the delivery better

its str8....any feed is appreciated

FatalX wrote:thats why I forward those.....,thoughts for you to process//
and nah I'm not telepathic,I just believe that I'm Godsent//

to me it feels like i was kinda forced but other than that

good job bro

thank you bro n fasho

thank you...i'll keep that in mind next time

1st link

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/time-vt20623.html#p163166

2nd link

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/1st-one-vt20619.html#p163167

wrote this on a cypher but wanted feedback on it

So many checks dat the SLA boi cashin

i go harder than a virgin in da playboi mansion

time for neck ...

So many checks dat the SLA boi cashin

i go harder than a virgin in da playboi mansion

time for neck slashin, back lashin,

seatbelt better be fastend

cuz here enters da Southern Livin Assassin

so ya know ya acts crashin

n hearts burnin

ya sins, from way back when, are killin ya within ...