Death (intro)

[SLA]

suicidal intentions

is the last that i mentioned

but since then

ive had a more vivid vision

of my wrist indention

overdose on dope like homer simpson

if there aint enough crimson

but it flows well as long as i keep it under water

my arms are a sure slaughter

but there is a need for me to go a bit farther

i grip the blade harder and slice my jugular vein

finally im done with the pain

cuz reality is far more worst than dantes inferno

9th ring were i odly burn cold

[Kuhlerblynd]

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/text- ... t3038.html

[QwarterZ]

this was alright...it seems like a verse for a song
like your just tryna keep up with the beat
which is cool, but you need a little more depth in this
this would be cool if your cyphering with friends
and just tryna get some Ooo's and Ahh's
keep writing man!

[SLA]

appreciate the link it opened my eyes

and QwaterZ i feel what ya sayin and deff goin to keep writtin

[NoVeL]

my arms are a sure slaughter

but there is a need for me to go a bit farther

i grip the blade harder and slice my jugular vein

You had something here.. Elaborate!

[SLA]

yeah i just realized what you talkin about

i'll be sure to do that next time

i dont really edit or anything

i just write whats on my mind and post

[Kause mc]

Hey bro. Yea its great to just post straight up but if ur tryna catch sum attention maybe write it out n read thru it a few times. A couple hours later your views on the piece will b different. Or not.. All good I do it all the time man. Anyways this isnt bad just b sure to use these feeds man

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[MonuMental]

I'm new on here, don't really know much about the way things go but I been readin some posts, nice message, yo, I feel this shit cause I've felt it. do what you do, time is progress.