iiight!!! Yo Thanks!! for the listen =)

One thing worth while.. If you were to adjust your tone to be more dominant at times with delivery that plus better wording can do you a fair amount of justice (wonders even)

Apart from that.. I noticed this is a diss track to one of the members- and yea the content is weak, flow just at par if ...

I feel that you do music for fun and to let loose? ..

I feel the Idea.. The hook has potential because of the direction you took with the concept- so it just needs a smoother flow.

The verses... Nothing special- strait forward is we can relate to-- but your flows not seasoned (you may think I'm ...

Mood music type ish... So yea!! Lay it on me.

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First V..Sliding on the beat well with your tone- kool content strait forward..

2nd.. Jumps out the gate kool, but then slips after that flow and content... Kinda dulled the track

3rd.. The beat break wasn't clean cut for him.. he jumps out the gate kool too. Slips a lil' bit then picks it up ...

..Cause they carry lies! True shyt.

Fisrt verse.. Cool shyt Drizzled on the beat.. Feeling the flute like sound-
Your attitude sat on the end up of each bar well, lyrics fit the vibe of this.

Wasn't with the common on the mix at first then it some how slid on pace and fitted it all well... Felt ...

Dang I need to hit this site up more.. ^^and thanks!! Lyrics are strait forward I know just "Sliding through" but thanks for the view holla where you need my ears.

Fair enough, thanks.

Its that time of year.. From getting ready for exams to major projects to putting in those extra hours for X-mas gifts or vacation.. It happens. Late January it should pick up.

Nov 5th Past =/ .... Any more coming?

Sliding Through with it, holla.


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-- Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:05 am --

The beat sounds like madd fun yo..

But yea This was kool, I was able to enjoy it- But as you should know by now- the mixing on the Double ups man! Not doing you justice going to fast for them to be off like that... Apart from that the lyrics chill some good points a few low points where you're just ...

...1st - Sliding through smooth, but the tone/voice could be smoother (my opinion) ... Lyrics for the topic are chillin, kept the flow all the way through with the lil' slurr in there which is kool, it is a tipsy track so yea.

..2nd, Coming across as the comic relief on the cut- but the lyrics ...