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Ty - Don't Look at Me

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.SkitZo with the Flow, seriously.[/b][/Center]
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Re: Ty - Don't Look at Me

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Verses seem a little choppy at times, it almost makes it seem as if you're falling off beat sporadically, but lyrically I think it's dope. You had some real nice punches and ideas throughout the track. Good choice in production. Mixing could use some improvement, and you definitely need to lower the ad-libs and make them more subtle. But other than those things, I think it's cool. Definitely decent mixtape material. You have a few loose ends that you need to tighten up a bit, but overall I'd sayin you're following the right track. Keep droppin! I rate this one a 7/10
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It doesn't seem a lil choppy, your flow that is, but I think your tryna follow the beat the best u can, and really i can't blame u cuz this beat is everywhere lol, but the lyrics nice, got some nice lines in there...the mixing could better, really the beat is bad quality so that doesnt help but really ur vocals just need to be mastered, ill second the adlibs being to loud, just to help try and leave the panning at -25 or lower and try to lower them a low as u can while allowing them to still be clear...it takes a lil work, but Ill this piece a nice full song, not bad man just clean up a few areas...
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Re: Ty - Don't Look at Me

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your lyrics are nice..if you could get a cleaner instrumental i think you could make this song really dope. ad libs are to loud but if you pan them n thin them a lil bit or even vocal level then watch your db balance it would fix that. anyways keep droppin famo
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Re: Ty - Don't Look at Me

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iiight!!! Yo Thanks!! for the listen =)
[Center][b]http://www.youtube.com/user/416UFO#p/a/u/1/IuPbt56GZAw
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