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Fisrt verse.. Cool shyt Drizzled on the beat.. Feeling the flute like sound-
Your attitude sat on the end up of each bar well, lyrics fit the vibe of this.
Wasn't with the common on the mix at first then it some how slid on pace and fitted it all well... Felt like he sat on the line of rapping and spoken word which works for this.
I see you though man!! I remember a few other cuts by you.. I'ma see what else you got up - Holla.
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Thnx for the feed man, much appreciated, Ima hit ur drop up in a minute...The Common pice was a spoken word joint he did on Def Jam Poetry that I liked and fit, so good call on that one...def. keep ya eyes for more drops, as the mixtape draws nearer there should be a couple more i release
Dude, this fuckin track is smoothe as shit. You snapped in that shit dude. And yeah, they do lie. props on this track, dog.
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Thnx for the feedback everyone, as this track was sitten for a while without any, but Im glad yall took the time to write what i can work on and what u enjoyed about the track, I'm def. seeking to improve and everyone lil bit u offer helps...I've hit some of ur tracks back too, pz.