thanks man. pre-shade it.

If you read any of my stuff, ya'll know I struggle like crazy with cadence, structure and all that. I say that to say I really don't care about none of that stuff with this piece...I'm just expressing. This real life. thanks homies!

My faiths shaken, hearts achin breakin,
for 5 years I been fadin ...

thanks for the feed.

Cuz the way I figga ego can’t get no bigga,
I considered one of them uppity hiccups,
Pass the poupon, upper class echelon,
PhDs like a big ass lexicon
More pieces than a leprechaun, see
PhD plastered on the marquee, smooth as Chablis when I free, 360 degrees of PhD, It’s all about me,
I insist ...

Thanks. it's just an intro...been struggling with structure/cadence and flow...tryna work the kinks. Good looking tho.

Don't trip of the content. I'm working on my cadence and flow. Let me know.

grab a seat welcome to rhyme central,
academic essential, gone need a notebook pencil,
PhD name n credential, influencial,
big monumental, is my cadence sequential?

Thanks homies.

thanks homies. Imma work on developing cadence/beat. that should help me with the choppiness/wordiness.

Thanks for the constructive criticism.

thanks...like my other drop. Help me rise.

Thanks for the feedback. Explain structure and flow. I'm a rookie at this.

thanks man. how do i make my multies pop without being so wordy?

thanks man.

too risky,
I spiked my punches 200 poof whiskey,
courtesy of Jethro from the foothills of Starkville Mississippi, private stock no label,
got ya gulping the stuff straight out the ladle, at the party guarding the table,
punch drunk tipsy, you thought you could whip me, oops somebody done slipped you ...

thanks yung. be up!

I've seen a "Charles" before...you made me see him again...good stuff.

wow homie. You could feel that thing with you.