aight do i have to break this down or can i say....

Opener-K
Punches-K
Multies-K
Flow-K
Wordplay-K
Nameplay-K
Closer-K

Catswipe- K?

v/ K

Burnin’ through this verse , to be rude and hurt , cuz you da worse /
you’re straight L’in/Ellen , like you was her from another universe! /
stupid nerd , you ain’t heard ? I’m a puzzle to well thinkers / *
You’ll get yourself killed tryin’ to solve me like Hell Raiser! /*
“M” can’t flip it to a ...

i'll drop now if you drop now i just didn't wanna drop like 3-4 days b4 you

lol what makes you think i'm not going to show? O.o

wow good articulation for rappin' so fast, nyce flow about the most high bro real talk, ever listen to red cloud? i met him... that is my dude.. pigeon john too

this is one i did years ago... but hey why not get feedback

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4a285VN2zBQ

Mic and stuff not up so usually i do this till i'm ready for real songz again.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8V_Qbv6q ... re=related

oh thiz junk iz on point luve the delivery

T wassup? ya flow is as choppy as meat butchaz/
beef would just be to tough for you teeth sucka/
now he shook up, since i been speakin' of things cut up/
a leprechaun couldn't help this dawg get his luck up/

(iono i'm just bored *shrug*)

Tella's Spitz

emcee munch session bitch and im on a mission
just know your-in trouble like u got problems piss'n
Weak Opener IMO, sort of a punch though.


see the difference is i flow, ya shit's plain as water
no justice, i just diss and leave the plantiff slaughter'd
meh... weak...

in ...

Woaaaah nyce... major break down time...

Arv's Spitz


Its obvious mah battle-bars-sicker, you can't dodge the shots cuz arv-is-far-quicker,
and you a snail bitch!! ill straight up put a'shell on ya back' like ya avatar-picture!!
Daaaaamn, clean opener, killin' multies great punch, creative ...

check

lmao.... u r serious aight do whateva...

6's drop

ok ill pop it off with a quick 4 bars/
and have u and friends geekin for more like i cut it with inositol/phew!...
k um... cut what? the flow? um... not a punch... plus it seems sorta off, too many words


i can tell u never tuched coke lame ...

meaning it's less than a 180/
It's messed up that one gay sees that ya'll don't need no lessons in 'bum-raiding'/

lol!

i got a thoguht let me hold that, oh snap!/
like Kodak, ya bro's back like a throwback/ (oh crap!)
yes its known fact, that if you practice hate/
then you ask ya face for laceratin' catastrophe/
and that's the way it has to be/
don't get mad at me if I grab sneaks cuz you lack protection like ...