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Deciple
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Higher Education.

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Hit me up with some feed back. Let me know if you like my rap.. this is one of many fast rap but i can regular flow also. hit me up and i will add another song.
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Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: Higher Education.

Post by MOEstradamus »

aint goin to lie i didn't xpect much from you due to your style but man you had me going dis drop was good i don't know much about mixing and shit so you wont get good advice but it was a good listen keep it comin
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Post by -MenaCe- »

It Was Decent...

Not really feelin the speed rap tho...

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Re: Higher Education.

Post by drunken jesus »

the speach impediment i mentioned in the other track isn't as noticable in this, flow is pretty good in the fast part some enunciation slips here and there but nothing major, flow in the slow parts is worse theirs more awkward pauses and you stretch words too much nvm i don't think thats you, the atl sounding dude was better than the white dude with the soft voice (his flow was off a bit and delivery was weak), lyrics were a lil too simple and lacked clear direction overall it was just random lines saying christianity is good which i guess is the description of christian rock/rap but you could've gone with a more detailed of a christian topic, hook was kinda weak not very catchy, lyrics for it were good it just wasn't delivered right
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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wow good articulation for rappin' so fast, nyce flow about the most high bro real talk, ever listen to red cloud? i met him... that is my dude.. pigeon john too
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i didnt even see these feed back... thanks for the feed.. lets get some more feed on it lol
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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